Max
I am writing a note. The note will be a lousy note. I actually dont know what to say. I'm just transferring my thoughts to this note. What did i do today? I ate cow meats at dinner. I ate too much. But i wanted to eat more. If i have a larger stomach, i would have had more. The more, the better. Sometimes it is not. If there are more wars, there will be a disaster. There are people dying. Michael jackson said. But im sitting in a chair and writing a note like a cyborg. Nowadays, this world is changing too fast to adapt. Technology is evolving faster than humanity is doing. But i am going to take advantage of it with lots of people on this website. Now i am going to smoke. I lit a cigarette. The smoke is spreading all over my room. I will stop smoking when I have a disease someday. I just can't stop. Because I am addicted to it. I tried to quit once, it didn't work. Why does a cigarette have an awful lot of harmful matters? If somebody invents cigarettes that dont have those bad things and instead have good things with strawberry flavour, i will kiss him or her on the cheek. Strawberry is red. Red is a passion. A life without a passion is like a dream without a memory. It is nothing. What does nothing mean? It means there is nothing that exists. The word 'exist' is similar to 'exit'. I think it is time to exit. - if there is anything wrong or awkward above, please correct them!
Nov 22, 2014 5:04 PM
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I am writing a note.

The note will be a lousy note.
This will be a lousy note.
I actually dont know what to say.
Actually, I don't know what to say.
I'm just transferring my thoughts to this note.
I'm just transferring my thoughts to writing.
What did i do today?
What did I do today? [Always capitalize <em>I</em>.]
I ate cow meats at dinner. I ate too much. But i wanted to eat more.
I ate beef for dinner. I ate too much, but I wanted to eat more.
If i have a larger stomach, i would have had more.
If I had a larger stomach, I would have eaten more.
The more, the better.
The more, the better.
Sometimes it is not.
But sometimes not.
If there are more wars, there will be a disaster. [Perfect!]

"There are people dying," said Michael Jackson.

But im sitting in a chair and writing a note like a cyborg.

But I'm sitting in a chair and writing a note like a cyborg.

[And I'm sitting in a chair correcting a note like a cyborg.]
Nowadays, this world is changing too fast to adapt.
Nowadays, this world is changing too fast for people to adapt.
Technology is evolving faster than humanity is doing.
Technology is evolving faster than humanity.
But i am going to take advantage of it with lots of people on this website.

Now i am going to smoke. I lit a cigarette.
Now I am going to smoke. I light a cigarette.
The smoke is spreading all over my room.

I will stop smoking when I have a disease someday.
I will stop smoking someday, when I have a disease.
I just can't stop. Because I am addicted to it. I tried to quit once, it didn't work.
I just can't stop, because I am addicted to it. I tried to quit once. It didn't work.
Why does a cigarette have an awful lot of harmful matters?
Why do cigarettes have so much harmful material?
If somebody invents cigarettes that dont have those bad things and instead have good things with strawberry flavour, i will kiss him or her on the cheek.
If somebody invented a cigarette that didn't have all those bad things, but instead had good things and had a strawberry flavour [I would spell it <em>flavor </em>because I am American.], I would kiss him or her on the cheek.
Strawberry is red.

Red is a passion.
Passion is red. [or, Red is the colour of passion. or Red is passionate.]
A life without a passion is like a dream without a memory.
A life without passion is like a dream without memory.
It is nothing.

What does nothing mean?

It means there is nothing that exists.

The word 'exist' is similar to 'exit'.

I think it is time to exit.



- If there is anything wrong or awkward above, please correct them!

 

I like your nihilistic, ironic style.

 

November 22, 2014
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