Evita
dear family letter part 2 When it comes to child care experience, I have looked after children in both formal and informal contexts. Last year, as part of my university studies in child psychology, I spent a month period working like a au pair in Cork, Ireland. Among others, I provided after-school tuition to children aged between 5 to 10 years. I have helped my parents look after my brother since birth and I can comfortably say that I sincerely enjoy spending time with children.  When it comes to leisure, I take pleasure in the simple things in life. I enjoy being outdoors, being with my friends, going for walks, visiting places I have not been to, and reading a good book. I also enjoy painting and on dull or rainy days, I often propose drawing and painting activities to my brother . As far as preferences are concerned, I am looking for a live-in arrangement with a host family, that would be happy to have me stay with and work for them for at least 6 months. I would also prefer looking after children aged between 6 months to 10 years. Lastly, although I am quite flexible, I would prefer to have working hours that would allow me to attend day time English language classes.  I would be happy to have the opportunity to speak with you: to answer whatever questions you may have about me or my childcare experiences; to learn more about your family; your interests and to know more about what you expect from the au pair arrangement.
Nov 23, 2014 5:35 PM
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dear family letter part 2

When it comes to child care experience, I have looked after children in both formal and informal contexts. Last year, as part of my university studies in child psychology, I spent a month period working like an au pair in Cork, Ireland. Among others things, I provided after-school tuition tutoring to children aged between 5 to 10 years. I have helped my parents look after my brother since birth, and I can comfortably say that I sincerely enjoy spending time with children.

 
When it comes to leisure, I take pleasure in the simple things in life. I enjoy being outdoors, being with my friends, going for walks, visiting places I have not been to, and reading a good book. I also enjoy painting, and on dull or rainy days, I often propose drawing and painting activities to my brother.


As far as preferences are concerned, I am looking for a live-in arrangement with a host family, that would be happy to have me stay with them and work for them for at least 6 months. I would also prefer looking after children aged between the ages of 6 months to and 10 years. Lastly, although I am quite flexible, I would prefer to have working hours that would allow me to attend day time daytime English language classes.

 
I would be happy to have the opportunity to speak with you; to answer whatever questions you may have about me or my childcare experiences; to learn more about your family; and your interests; and to know more about what you expect from the au pair arrangement.

 

Brava. You write very well in English. The wording is very natural and the tone is perfect for this type of letter.

November 24, 2014

dear family letter part 2

When it comes to child care experience with child care, I have looked after children in both formal and informal contexts. Last year, as part of my university studies in child psychology, I spent a month period working like a as an au pair in Cork, Ireland. Among others, I provided after-school tuition to children aged between 5 to 10 years.
I have helped my parents look after my brother since birth and I can comfortably say that I sincerely do enjoy spending time with children. 
When it comes to leisure, I take pleasure from the simple things in life. I enjoy being outdoors, being with my friends, going for walks, visiting places I have not been to, and reading a good book. I also enjoy painting and on dull or rainy days, I often propose ( dedicate/share?) drawing and painting activities to my brother .
As far as preferences are concerned, I am looking for a live-in arrangement with a host family, that would be happy to have me stay with and work for them for at least 6 months. I would also prefer looking after children aged between 6 months to 10 years. Lastly, although I am quite flexible, I would prefer to have working hours that would allow me to attend day time English language classes. 
I would be happy to have the opportunity to speak with you: to answer whatever questions you may have about me or my childcare experiences; to learn more about your family; your interests and to know more about what you expect from the au pair arrangement. 

November 24, 2014
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