Maria Escalante
My day My day is very tired. I'm working at 9:00 to 8:00pm I m send artesanias, <today know two persons and tall witch they're Im practic my english
Nov 23, 2014 10:38 PM
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My day

1-My day is very tired. 2-I'm working at 9:00 to 8:00pm 3-I m send artesanias, <4-today know two persons and tall witch they're Im practic my english

 

My day

1-(My day is very busy)or(My day makes me feel very tired)*My day = It .That is the reason you must use "makes" and not "make".

2-(I get to work at 9:00a.m. and finish at about 8:00p.m.)or(I start work at 9:00a.m. and finish at about 8:00p.m.)

The rest is a little difficult to understand.Let me try:

3-(I work with crafts)or(I am a craft worker).

4-(Today I've known two people and I told them I am practicing my English)

 

I am trying to improve my English too.:)

Sorry I am not a native speaker so I don't know if it's correct.

November 23, 2014

My day

My day is very tired. I'm working at 9:00 to 8:00pm I m send artesanias, <today know two persons and tall witch they're Im practic my english

 

My day is very tiring. 

My day is very long.

 

I'm working from 9:00 to 8:00 p.m. (esta día, voy a trabajar a partir de las nueve hasta las ocho).

I work from 9:00 to 8:00 p.m. (cada día, mis horas (horario?) es desde las nueva hasta las ocho)

 

I'm send artesanias = no tiene sentido.

 

<today know two persons and tall witch they're Im practic my english

Today I met two people

conocer a alguien = "to meet".  Conocí a dos personas = I met two people.  "To know" es más usado como "saber", pocas veces (infrequentamente?) como "conocer". 

 

and tall witch they're Im practic my english = no tiene sentido :o(

 

Tall = alto/a

Witch = bruja

they're = they are = ellos/ellas son/están

I'm practice my english = debe ser "I'm practicing my English" (Estoy practicando mi inglés).

 

November 25, 2014
Nice :) my try: I was very tired today (that day)! I work from 9:00 am to 8:00 pm. I have known two persons today and I told them that I practice English.
November 24, 2014
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