Guillermo
Task one. Trying to give a description about something. Subject cars. Aim: To describe objects Good morning, agent, I'm going to describe the only vehicle, which has run away very fast of this area, in which was an accident at the crack of dawn, as consequence of that I assume that would you like to have a talk with his driver. Back to the car, that kind of vehicle is rare to see at this part of island, I mean sir, that It will be easier to find because is not usual at all, focusing myself at the point, I saw a wonderful, big, antique, back, German, metal car like you can find in all movies, and I want to add that I can distinguish that its reserve tire was locate in the right side but in contrast I’m completely sure that its steering wheel was in the other side. That all for me side. So I'm wonder if I'm dismissed, agent?
Nov 23, 2014 11:25 PM
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Task one. Trying to give a description about something. Subject cars. Aim: To describe objects

 

Good morning, agent, I'm going to describe the only vehicle which has run away was traveling very fast from of this area, in which there was an accident at the crack of dawn, as consequence of which that I assume that would you like to have a talk with his its driver.

Back to the car, that kind of vehicle is rare to see at in this part of the island I mean, sir, that it will be easier to find because is not usual at all.  Focusing myself at on this the point, I saw a wonderful, big, antique, black, German metal car like you can find in all the movies, and I want to add that I can could discern distinguish that its reserve tire was located on the right side but in contrast I’m completely sure that its steering wheel was on the other side.

That's all for my part me side. So I'm wondering if I'm dismissed, agent?

 

I'm not sure I completely understood what you wanted to say, but I did my best to make the English flow more smoothly.

November 25, 2014
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