The Now Gains Recent Improvements [1] in My Hobby

My biggest favorite hobby is drawing.   [2] What Mr. H said stimulated me a lot, which was that you shouldn't use one way to drow draw the picture,.  It's not that you can't see it clearly but you can't draw it rightly correctly.  Just like your life, you can't only bury yourself in work without outputing expressing your thoughts.
It's let It lets me know that drawing is life.

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[1] I hope this is what you meant.

[2] Add a space (' ') after every comma (',') and full stop ('.').