What a Unforgettable Trip Last weekend,according to the itinerary,we two girls went for a short trip from Shanghai to Zhejiang Xitang ancient town. At first ,everything is ok in our schedual, I booke

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What a Unforgettable Trip Last weekend,according to the itinerary,we two girls went for a short trip from Shanghai to Zhejiang Xitang ancient town. At first ,everything is ok in our schedual, I booked the return bus tickects in the website,my classmate responsed the hotel in which we live.And in fact,everything goes in turn. Saturday morning,we went the bus station from our home,then the bus set off at 9:27, one hour later,the bus is in Xitang ,we came to the hotel ,after put down the heavy bags, the boss lead the way of the Xitang scenery to us ,it is so interesting thing that it doesn't need scenery ticket because of the hotel boss .so lucky! Xitang doesn't let us down ,there are two rivers in it,we just need along two rivers to go over the scenery,later I will upload one picture of Xitang ,it gives us one feeling that is calm. although the number of tourist can't be counted,but the feeling comes from my heart ,and can't drive my foot to another place . We also notice all sorts of snacks there ,but few of them are tasty,if you need some advices, I would recommend Maji steam meat and Caoji gorgon fruit cake ,they are worth trying.others if you are a foodie,you can try it whatever you want. Night comes too quickly ,but we still in the view spot,what we wait so long is the Bar street,because it began so late and may be so charming,it looks like a sound place because almost everyone in it looks enjoyable and relaxed, the place is very safe where there is a police nearby. Utimately ,come back to the unforgettable topic,why?what happend? Actually,I don't want to face it ,it is a shame affair,seceond morning,we took the back ticket to the bus station ,but at last we found that the unused tickets had already outdated .why?since the date of these tickets I booked from website was wrong by myself. I felt so upset from the staff .And I told my self never do that things again. Whatever it is a good journey ,since not only the journey let me be more toleratnt in nature ,but also makes me more careful with my own issue.

Nov 24, 2014 6:15 AM

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November 24, 2014

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November 24, 2014

What a Unforgettable Trip

Last weekend,according to the itinerary,we two girls went for a short trip from Shanghai to Zhejiang Xitang to an ancient town.
At first ,everything is was ok in our schedual schedule , I booked the return bus tickects in on the website,my classmate responsed that the hotel in which we live.And in fact,everything goes in turn.
Saturday morning,we went the bus station from our home,then the bus set off at 9:27, one hour later,the bus is in Xitang ,we came to the hotel ,after we put down the heavy bags, the boss lead the way of to the Xitang scenery to us ,it is so interesting thing that it doesn't need scenery ticket because of the hotel boss .so lucky!
Xitang doesn't let us down ,there are two rivers in it,we just need to go along two rivers to go get over the scenery,later I will upload one picture of Xitang ,it gives us one the feeling that is of calm. although the number of tourist's can't be counted,but the feeling comes from my heart ,and can't drive my foot to another place .
We also notice all sorts of snacks there ,but few of them are tasty,if you need some advices, I would recommend Maji steam meat and Caoji gorgon fruit cake ,they are worth trying.others if you are a foodie,you can try it whatever you want.
Night comes too quickly ,but we still in the view spot,what we wait so long is at the Bar street,because it began so late and may be so charming,it looks like a sound place because almost everyone in it looks enjoyable happy and relaxed, the place is very safe where and there is a police nearby.
Utimately ,come back to the unforgettable topic,why?what happend?
Actually,I don't want to face it ,it is a shame affair,seceond morning,we took the back ticket to the bus station ,but at last we found that the unused tickets had already become outdated .why?since the date of these tickets I booked from website was wrong by myself.
I felt so upset from with the staff .And I told my self never do that things again.
Whatever it is a good journey ,since not only the journey let me be more toleratnt in nature ,but also makes me more careful with my own issue.