Victor
A problem to sort up Hi everyone. I'm writing to you while I'm quite busy and overwhelmed at this moment. This is because I'm preparing all the stuff to take the graduation photographies of my degree classmates. This will take place in the next week in my college and I've got it all prepared except one thing: the costume for the students. Despite there is more than a week left to the event, I'm becoming quite nervous because I'm not sure about how much time is needed to prepare such a thing. I've already sent messages to different business that treat the matter and, by now, I'm waiting for any answer. If anybody answer me before the end of this day, I will start to call all of them until I can have an answer.
Nov 24, 2014 3:25 PM
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A problem to sort up (another option: A problem to solve)

Hi everyone. I'm writing to you even though I'm quite busy and overwhelmed right now.  This is because I'm preparing everything I need to take the graduation photographie(better: pictures) of my college classmates. This will happen next week at my college and I've got it all prepared except one thing: the outfit for the students (better: the student outfits).

Despite there being more than a week left until the event, I'm becoming (better: getting) quite nervous because I'm not sure about how much time is needed to prepare for such a thing. I've already sent messages to different businesses that handle the matter and, by now, I'm [just] (not required, but more natural) waiting for any answer. If nobody answers me before (better: by) the end of today, I will start to call all of them until I can have an answer.

November 24, 2014

A problem to sort out up

Hi everyone. I'm writing to you while even though I'm quite busy and overwhelmed at this the moment. This is because I'm preparing all the stuff I need to take the graduation photographs of my degree classmates. This will take place in the next week in my college and I've got it all prepared except for one thing: the costume outfits for the students.

Despite the fact that there is more than a week left to the event, I'm becoming quite nervous because I'm not sure about how much time is needed to prepare such a thing. I've already sent messages to different businesses that treat deal with the matter and, by now, I'm waiting for any answer. If nobody answers me before the end of this day, I will start to call all of them until I can have get an answer.

November 24, 2014
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