Sunday afternoon

Yesterday afternoon I drove to my parents house, which is located near to the sea. They live in a small village placed situated in the north of the country.

When I was arriving there <em>(sounds awkward)</em>, During my drive there, I was surprised caught off-guard by a storm. (run-on sentense) and Although there wasn't even much traffic, I had decided to stop my car because I was afraid of having an accident (I changed the order so it flows a little more) , altough there were was not much traffic in that road as people were having a rest. Nevertheless (out of place "nevertheless"), it was raining strongly pouring rain, and the wind blew with a lot of strenght.

A little time later (better: "Later on,"), a car stopped next to mine. and then a A young man came out to me and asked for me for some money. His clothes seemed very old, even his trousers were broken. He looked like dirty, a poor young man who needed some drugs to be calm.

I felt sorrow sorry for him, but I didn't give him anything to him. I wanted to escape and arrive at my parentis house already. I even thought about going back home because it was a bit late already, and this morning I had to go to work. I would have to be at work in the morning.

Finally, the storm stopped and I could come back home without having an accident or problems with the young man; however, I couldn't see my parents, who and I hadn't seen them since for a lot of time ago.