Correct my essay please!!

The worst program ever

The programme I would like to write is “Esto es Guerra”.

<em>Programme is British.  Program is American.  (Sólo una diferencia en ortografia.  Muchas palabras en inglés vienen del frances.  Esta ortografia queda en la ortografia de Ingleterra, pero no en EE.UU). </em>

Is the most famous youth program in Perú, which has been on air since three years.

<em>[It is] Is the most famous youth program in Perú, which has been on air since [for] three years.</em>

Is a program about competition which has two teams, “leones” and “cobras”. They struggle to win each competition.

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<em>[It is] Is a program about competition which has two teams, "leones" and "cobras."</em>

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<em>A program about competition = un programa sobre la competencia, por lo general.</em>

<em>A program about a competition = un program sobre una competencia en concreto.</em>

The participants are attractives men and women, who always want to stand out yes or yes.

<em>The participants are attractive men and women, who always want to stand out.</em>

<em>Los adjectivos (como attractive) no cambia en número: (por ejemplo: An attractive man is sitting at a table with many attractive women). </em>

<em>No creo que "sí o sí" tenga sentido en ese contexto. </em>

Most of the participants are well know persons and polemic people that’s why the tv program has a lot of audience.

Most of the participants are well-known persons (people is more common) and controversial people.  That's why the tv program has a large audience.

<em>La palabra "polemic" o "polemical" en inglés esta relacionada con "polemico/a" pero tiene un sentido un poco diferente.  Es una palabra no usada mucho, que significa una ataque contra otra persona o idea.  </em>

<em>Poco mejor: Most of the participants are well-known and controversial people.</em>

They has had one of the most famous scandals, the theme of the moth was the infidelity of “Guty” an ex participant of “Esto es Guerra” who said in the program the famous frace “I was not infidel”.

They have had one of the most famous scandals.

They had a famous scandal (suena mejor).

They had one of the most famous scandals in Television (suena mejor)

También: They had one of the most famous scandals in the history of television

The theme of the month was the infidelity of "Guty", an ex-participant of "Esto es Guerra", who said in the program the famous phrase "I was not unfaithful."

moth = polilla; mariposa nocturna.

infidel = infiel, descreído

También: The theme of the month was "Guty's" infidelity, an ex-participant of "Esto es Guerra", who said the famous phrase: "I was not unfaithful."

This program has the higest rating even do it started like a copy of another competitions program called “Combate” which has the same format.

This program has the highest rating, even though it started out as a copy of another competition program called "Combate", which has the same format.

In my opinion this is a program that shows why we are an undervelopment country, most teenagers love to see them doing literally nothing in the tv.

In my opinion, this is a program that shows (poco mejor: demonstrates)  why we are an underdeveloped country.  Most teenagers love to see these people doing literally nothing on TV.

También, poco mejor: In my opinion, this program shows/demonstrates why we are . . .

I’m pretty sure most of the teenagers look up at them, in my opinion the participants have nothing in their brains.

I'm pretty sure most teenagers look up to them.  In my opinion, the participants have nothing in their brains.  (poco mejor: are stupid, are idiotic, are foolish, act like children, etc.)

Correct my essay please!!

The worst program ever
The programme(British)/program(USA) that I would like to write about is “Esto es Guerra”. It's the most famous youth (program/show) in Perú, which has been on air for three years. It's a program about a competition which has two teams, “leones” and “cobras”. They struggle to win each competition.
The participants are attractives men and women, who always want to stand out yes or yes. Most of the participants are well know persons and polemic people, that’s which is why the tv program has a lot of audience viewers.They've has had one of the most famous scandals. The theme of the month was the infidelity of “Guty”, an ex-participant of “Esto es Guerra”, who said in during the program the famous phrase “I was not infidel”. This program has the higest rating, even do though it started like a copy of another a competitive competitions program called “Combate”, which has the same format.
In my opinion, this is a program that shows why we are an undervelopment underdevolped country. Most teenagers love to see watch them people doing literally nothing in the on tv. I’m pretty sure most of the teenagers look up at to them. In my opinion the participants have nothing in their brains.