We Can Help by To Make a Better World 

Despite all you we may might think about the world and humanity, which is sometimes kind of can be disgusting for us at times, there are many people working for to make the world a better place. Others There are people who work for to help animals, ancients the elderly, drug-addicts people suffering with addictions, and underprivileged children. Others fight against pollution, injustice, abortion, indigence, and thousands of other problems. which We consciously know humanity is we are responsible for one another. That’s the reason why humanity itself needs a stronger change in mind of heart. 

If we spent more time to teaching by model example with little details such as taking care of our animals, our children would see what we do. If you take Our children also watch us as we steal a book, you hit a abuse an animal, dog, if you and when we throw out toss our garbage on the streets.  

You could have too much money and it wouldn’t be enough. Our desire for wealth can never be satisfied. By working alone We work endlessly for our money, yet the only thing we’ll reach gain is getting tired exhaustion, and the tearing of our souls out with so much pain, injustice and indifference.

I believe in that through education, rising up consciousness we shall raise our collective awareness of these needs, and our children will we all are who grow up by taking care of the planet and contributing constantly to the improvements and positive changes to which should be passed from generation to generation.

Nothing is in vain. From little or much Wether we are able to help just a little bit or a great deal, when we give with love, anything remains is possible. Only Just one child who learns the this message can transmit it and multiply it throughout the world. 

Qué bonita. ¿Sabe la poema de Octavio Paz: "Entre la piedra y la flor?" Lee la aqui:  <em>http://www.poesi.as/op02032.htm   </em>
Si teine preguntas de estos correctiones, me pida.  

Practicing English ... (my poor improving English)

we can help by to become a better world
Despite all you might think about the world and humanity, which is sometimes kind of at times disgusting for us, there are many people working for the (betterment of the) world planet. Others Some work for animals, ancients the elderly, drug-addicts and children; against pollution, injustice, abortion, indigence and thousands of problems which we consciously know humanity is responsible for. That’s the reason why humanity itself needs a stronger change in mind (I would add, "so that... " re-emphasize reason as this can be amgious since you talked both about the problems with humanity as well as all the good people are doing to improve the planet.) 

If we spent spend more time to teach by model of example, with little details such as taking care of and treating our animals with respect. Children see what we do: if you take a book, if you hit a dog, if you throw out garbage on the streets… (If/then statement not completed. What would happen if we spend more time teaching by example?)  

You We could have too much money and it wouldn’t be never realize it's enough. By working alone, the only thing we’ll reach is getting tired, tearing our souls out with so much pain, injustice and indifference.

I believe in education, and rising raising up consciousness. and We all are who aught to grow up by taking care of the planet and contributing constantly to improvements and positive changes to be passed from generation to generation.

Nothing is in vain. From little or much we give with love anything remains. Even if only one child who learns the message, she can transmit it and multiply it.

Very good cosita. I think I want to make song out of it.

Practicing English ... (my poor English)

we can help by to make a better world
Despite all you might think about the world and humanity, which is sometimes kind of disgusting for us, there are many people working for the world. Others  Many (people) work for   animals, ancients old people, drug-addicts and children; against pollution, injustice, abortion, indigence and thousands of  problems which we consciously know humanity is responsible for. That’s the reason why humanity itself needs a stronger change in of mind.

If We  should spent more time to teach teaching by model example with little details such as like taking care of our animals pets. Children see what we do: if you take a book, if you hit a dog, if you throw out garbage on the streets…

You could have too much money and  but it wouldn’t be enough. By working alone the only thing we’ll reach achieve is getting tired, tearing our souls out with so much a lot of pain, injustice and indifference.

I believe in education, rising up consciousness and  in that we all are who grow up by taking care of the planet and contributing constantly to improvements and positive changes to be that will be passed from generation to generation.

Nothing is in vain. From Little or much, what we give with love anything remains. Only one child who learns the message can transmit it and multiply it.

Good job!