My birthday
Yesterday (it) was my birthday, without the notification from Facebook, nobody knew about it. The only two peoples who knew it was my birthday (<em>not incorrect to say this, but you don't need it as</em> <em>you have already referred to your birthday</em>) were my aunt and my sister. My aunt wished me Happy Birthday on we chat and my sister sent a cake to me. After blowing out the candle, I took a family photo with my sister and my parents. It was a quite birthday for me.
One year ago(Last year <em>sounds better</em>), I went to New Zealand on the day before my birthday. I wanted to celebrate my birthday overseas, but since I was a newcomer, I did not know many friends yet, (I hadn't made many friends yet) so I only got a cupcake from my landlord.
My wish for my birthday is was that I can become a more mature person (I hoped that I could become a more mature person) and that I will would improve my English.