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Do you agree or disagree: Teacher should assign homework that students must do everyday. Imagine a situation: Finally having got your favorite baseball team ticket, you have been looking forward to it for a whole month. Tonight is the night. However, your teacher assigned loads of homework today and asked every student to turn it in tomorrow morning. After struggling, you went to the ball game but you couldn’t enjoy it because you are still worried about the unfinished homework. After the ball game, you stayed up all night and finished the homework perfunctory. It goes without saying that both teacher and the students were not satisfied about the result. Therefore, I disagree with the statement that teacher should assign homework that students must do everyday. To begin with, in order to turn in their homework in time, students might do it careless because they don’t have time understanding it thoroughly. For example, after finishing their homework, they don’t want to spend more time on deliberating the question they have during the class. Thus, the effect of homework is below expectations. Next to go would be, as the study divulges, homework puts a fetter on the interest of students. That is to say, doing the routine homework makes the students lose their flexibility to arrange what they want to do at night and which might strangle their interest in that subject. The motivation in study is very important and if they lose their interest in learning, it won’t be easy to get it back. Last but not least, if the student keep getting scolded because they didn’t hang in the homework in time or it is not well-done, it is possible that they lose their confidence. For instance, they might even skip classes in order to escape the homework and give up on studying. In a nutshell, based on the aforementioned, I disagree with the statement that teacher should assign homework that students must do everyday.
Nov 26, 2014 11:12 AM
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Do you agree or disagree: Teacher should assign homework that students must do everyday.

 

Teachers should assign homework to students everyday. Do you agree?

 

Imagine this situation. You have finally having gotten the tickets to your favorite baseball team's match ticket. You have been looking forward to this match it for an entire whole month.The match is taking place tonight is the night.


However, your teacher just assigned loads of homework today and asked required every student to submit them turn it in tomorrow morning. After having a dilemma struggling, you decided to go for went to the baseball game. However, but you couldn’t fully enjoy it because you are still worried about the unfinished homework.

 

After the baseball game, you stayed up all night to finish and finished the homework half-heartedly perfunctory. Obviously, It goes without saying that both the teacher and the students were not satisfied with about the results. Therefore, I disagree with the statement that teacher should assign homework to that students must do everyday.


Firstly To begin with, because in order to turn in students are pressured to submit their homework on in time, students might rush through them do it careless because they don’t  , leaving won't have little or no time for understanding it thoroughly. For example, after finishing their homework, they don’t want to spend more time on deliberating thinking through the questions they had in during the class. Thus, the quality effect of homework is below expectations.


Secondly, Next to go would be, as the study material gets tough divulges, regular homework affects puts a fetter on the interest of students. That is to say, Doing the routine homework takes up time for  makes the students lose their flexibility to arrange what they want to do other activities at night. As a result, and which might strangle their interest in that the subject would be affected. The motivation in studying is very important and if they lose their interest in learning, it won’t be easy to get it back.


Finally Last but not least, if the students keep getting scolded because they didn’t hang hand in the homework in on time or it is not done well well-done, it is possible that could dampen lose their motivation confidence. For instance, they might even skip classes in order to escape the homework and give up on studying.


In a nutshell, based on the three reasons I mentioned aforementioned, I disagree with the statement that teacher should assign homework that to students must do everyday.

 

不错! The style of this essay is argumentative. It is one of the most difficult forms of essay to write! :)

 

Other suggestion:

用成语 (idiom) to replace    stayed up all night --> burned the midnight oil

 

Instead of saying

After the baseball game, you stayed up all night to finish the homework half-heartedly.


You can also say

After the baseball game, you burned the midnight oil to finish the homework half-heartedly.

 

December 28, 2014
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