A amazing day! I received a call in the morning. It was a friend who asked to me if I already ready was. I was very surprised because I did not hope any visit. Anyway I quickly went to my uncle's hous

Joaquin

A amazing day! I received a call in the morning. It was a friend who asked to me if I already ready was. I was very surprised because I did not hope any visit. Anyway I quickly went to my uncle's house because I could not have a shower at home because my hot water boiled was broken down so I had twenty minutes to go walking for one kilometres away to have the shower and coming back while she is coming to my village. It was raining but I do not mind because I was excited so I took my motor bike with two helmets and went out to Train Station. She promptly arrived and we were together at home. The way on the road driving my motorbike was spectacular because I could feel her arms around my chest and that is a terrific feeling. The excuse for that journal was that we had a EF test at university in few days. We sitted on the sofa and we started the lesson which was being watched on the tv because I have a hdmi's cable what I could put the information from the laptop to the tv. It was amazing. Cheers.

Nov 26, 2014 12:33 PM

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An amazing day!

I received a call in the morning. It was a friend, who asked to me if I was already ready was yet. I was very surprised because I did not hope expect any visit. Anyway, I quickly went to my uncle's house because I could not have a shower at home because my hot water boiled boiler was broken down. so I had to walk for twenty minutes to go walking for to his house, one kilometres away, to have the a shower and coming get back while before she is coming comes to my village. It was raining but I do did not mind because I was excited. so I took my motor bike with and two helmets and went out to the train station. She promptly arrived and we were together at home went home together. The way on the road journey home driving riding my motorbike was spectacular because I could feel her arms around my chest and that is it was a terrific feeling. The excuse for that journal was that we had an EF test at university in few days ago.
We sitted sat on the sofa and we started the lesson which was being we watched on the tv because I have had a hdmi's cable what with which I could put send the information from the laptop to the tv.
It was amazing.
Cheers.

November 26, 2014

Hi Joaquin, I've corrected your notebook entry below and I hope you'll find it useful. Just a couple of things to remember: - words beginning with a vowel are proceeded by 'an' instead of 'a'. For example: 'an apple', 'an egg'. - Make sure to use the correct verb tense. A couple of times you've used the present tense where you should have used the past tense. Other than that, this is really good. You clearly have a good grasp of the language and can communicate your thoughts well. If you have any other questions, feel free to ask me. Salud! James

November 26, 2014

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