Writing a business email Dear Mr. Junior Kelly. I am writing to inform you that the CEO of Future Softwareinc Mister Kerr, he will be visiting New York next week and he would like to visit an impor

Rosa Rosado

Writing a business email Dear Mr. Junior Kelly. I am writing to inform you that the CEO of Future Softwareinc Mister Kerr, he will be visiting New York next week and he would like to visit an important client there, called Christopher Biggins at the Electronic Solutions company office. He will have some free time on Wednesday (September 23rd) in the afternoon, and he is planning to visit him when he arrive. I have attached his schedule that inform all his visits duraing his trip and also you can use it for more information and details about his itinarary. Best Regards, Rosa Rosado, CEO

Nov 26, 2014 2:28 PM

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Writing a business email

Dear Mr. Junior Kelly,

I am writing to inform you that the CEO of Future Software Inc. Mister Mr. Kerr he will be visiting New York next week and he would like to visit an important client there, called Mr. Christopher Biggins at the Electronic Solutions company office.

He will have some free time on Wednesday (September 23rd) in the afternoon, and he is planning to visit him Mr. Biggins when he arrives. I have attached his schedule that inform detailing all of his visits duraing during his trip and also which you can use it refer to for more information and details about his itinarary.

Best Kind Regards,

Rosa Rosado, CEO

November 26, 2014

Hi Rose, I'm no good english correction, anyway I noticed: arrive/arrives duraing/during information/informations

and maybe you can avoid to use he because you specified the name of the CEO

Take my suggestions 'with doubts', I'm not a native english speaker, as I said before

Bye, have a good day

Writing a business email

Dear Mr. Junior Kelly.

I am writing to inform you that the CEO of Future Softwareinc Mister Kerr, he will be visiting New York next week and he would like to visit an important client there, called Christopher Biggins at the Electronic Solutions company office.

He will have some free time on Wednesday (September 23rd) in the afternoon, and he is planning to visit him when he arrive. I have attached his schedule that inform all his visits duraing his trip and also you can use it for more information and details about his itinarary.

Best Regards,

Rosa Rosado, CEO

November 26, 2014

Writing a business email

Dear Mr. Junior Kelly.

I am writing to inform you that the CEO of Future Softwareinc, Mr. Kerr, will be visiting New York next week. While there, he would like to visit an important client, Christopher Biggins, at the Electronic Solutions company office.

He will have some free time on Wednesday, September 23rd, in the afternoon. He is planning to visit when he arrives. I have attached his schedule which details all of his visits during his trip. You can refer to it for more information about his itinarary.

Best Regards,

Rosa Rosado, CEO

December 4, 2014

Hi Rosa, I have corrected your entry below and I hope you will find it useful. Overall it is a very good email and there were just a few minor corrections to be made. If you have any questions or would like any more help with Business English, please get in touch! All the best, James

November 26, 2014

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