Last summer vacation I traveled to paris by myself in the last summer vacation and it was the most romantic experience that I've ever had. My major is french so I'd really wanted to go ot Frane and vi

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Last summer vacation I traveled to paris by myself in the last summer vacation and it was the most romantic experience that I've ever had. My major is french so I'd really wanted to go ot Frane and visited all the tourists spots that I'd learned at school. However, I only stayed in paris for 5days so I had to move as busy as a bee. In paris, there was a rainbow of places to go but my favorite place was the Eiffel Tower. Whenever I thought of paris, the first place that I wanted to go was Eiffel Tower. So when I first saw it, I felt like it smiled at me and welcomed me. Usually, I do not like crowded plce, but I loved to be there eventhough there were thousands of people. The Eiffel Tower was so romantic especially when it had a light show. It twinkled like stares. The Eiffel Tower that I saw in the flesh was much more beautiful and romantic than I saw in the movies. I hope I could visit there again, not alone but with my family then it would be like heaven! Thankyou:)!!!!

Nov 27, 2014 12:27 AM

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<em>Last Summer's Vacation</em>

I travelled solo to paris by myself in the last summer's vacation and it was the most romantic experience that I've ever had. My major is french so I'd really wanted to go oto France and visited all the tourists spots that I'd learned about at school. However, I only stayed in Paris for 5 days so I had to move around as like a busy as a bee.

In Paris, there was a rainbow of places to go but my favorite place was the Eiffel Tower. Whenever I thought of Paris, the first place that I wanted to go to was there Eiffel Tower. So When I first saw it, I felt like it that tower seemed to smiled at me and welcomed me. Usually, I do not like crowded places, but I loved to be there even though there were thousands of people. That place e Eiffel Tower was so especially romantic when it had a light show. It twinkled like stares. The Eiffel Tower that I saw Seeing it in the flesh was much more beautiful and romantic than how I saw it in the movies. I hope I could visit there again. Not alone the next time but with my family. then iIt would be like heaven!

Thankyou:)!!!!

November 27, 2014

Last summer vacation

I traveled to paris by myself in during the my last summer vacation and it was the most romantic experience that I've ever had. My major is french so I'd really wanted to go to France and visited all the tourists spots that I'd learned about at school. However, I only stayed in paris for 5 days so I had to move as busy as a bee.

In paris, there was a rainbow of places to go but my favorite place was the Eiffel Tower. Whenever I thought of paris, the first place that I wanted to go was the Eiffel Tower. So when I first saw it, I felt like it smiled at me and welcomed me. Usually, I do not like crowded place, but I loved to be there even though there were thousands of people.

The Eiffel Tower was so romantic especially when it had a light show. It twinkled like stares. The Eiffel Tower that I saw in the flesh was much more beautiful and romantic than I saw in the movies.

I hope I could visit there again, not alone but with my family then it would be like heaven!

Thankyou:)!!!!

You did such a good job! Only a couple fixes to make it sound more natural. I hope it's helpful to you and I'm glad you had such a beautiful experience in France. I've never been there myself but it sounds wonderful.

November 27, 2014

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