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Buenas, alguien que me pueda ayudar con este texto. The first Dutch outpost in New Netherlands was established at Fort Orange (now Albany) in 1964. It became a depot of the fur trade. But the most important settlement was built at the southern tip of the island of Manhatan, whic commanded the great harbor at the mouth of the Hudson and East Rivers. Peter Minuit, the first governor general of New Netehrlands, “purchased” the island from the Canarsie Indians. However, the Canarsie might be described as tourists from Brooklyn, and Minuit had to make a later payment to the group that actually resided there. In 1626, engineers from the Netherlands arrived in Manhattanites. The fort became the nucleus of the town of New Amsterdam. Soon Manhattan had its first skyline: the solid outline of the fort, the flagstaff flying the Dutch flag, the silhouette of a giant windmill, and the mast s of trading ships.
Nov 27, 2014 12:40 AM
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Buenas, alguien que me pueda ayudar con este texto.

The first Dutch outpost in New Netherland was established at Fort Orange (now Albany) in 1614. It became a depot for the fur trade. But the most important settlement was built at the southern tip of the island of Manhattan, which commanded the great harbor at the mouth of the Hudson and East Rivers. Peter Minuit, the first Governor General of New Netherland, “purchased” the island from the Canarsie Indians. However, the Canarsie might have been described as tourists from Brooklyn, and Minuit had to make a later payment to the group that actually resided there. In 1626, engineers from the Netherlands arrived in Manhattan. The fort became the nucleus of the town of New Amsterdam. Soon Manhattan had its first skyline: the solid outline of the fort, the flagstaff flying the Dutch flag, the silhouette of a giant windmill, and the masts of trading ships.

November 27, 2014

Buenas, alguien que me pueda ayudar con este texto.

The first Dutch outpost in New Netherland was established at Fort Orange (now Albany) in 1964 [Se me hace que ese no es el año correcto). It became a depot for the fur trade. But the most important settlement was built at the southern tip of the island of Manhattan, which commanded the great harbor at the mouth of the Hudson and East Rivers. Peter Minuit, the first Governor General of New Netherland, “purchased” the island from the Canarsie Indians. However, the Canarsie might have been described as tourists from Brooklyn, and Minuit had to make a later payment to the group [1] that actually resided there. In 1626, engineers from the Netherlands arrived in Manhattanites. The fort became the nucleus of the town of New Amsterdam. Soon Manhattan had its first skyline: the solid outline of the fort, the flagstaff flying the Dutch flag, the silhouette of a giant windmill, and the masts of trading ships.

 

[1]  If it was another tribe, use the word "tribe" instead of "group."

November 27, 2014

Buenas, alguien que me pueda ayudar con este texto.

The first Dutch outpost in New Netherlands was established at Fort Orange (now Albany) in 1964. It became a depot of for the fur trade. But the most important settlement was built at the southern tip of the island of Manhatan, which commanded the great harbor at the mouth of the Hudson and East Rivers. Peter Minuit, the first governor general of New Netehrlands, “purchased” the island from the Canarsie Indians. However, the Canarsie might be described as tourists from Brooklyn, and Minuit had to make a later payment to the group that actually resided there. In 1626, engineers from the Netherlands arrived in Manhattanites. The fort became the nucleus of the town of New Amsterdam. Soon Manhattan had its first skyline: the solid outline of the fort, the flagstaff flying the Dutch flag, the silhouette of a giant windmill, and the masts of trading ships.

November 27, 2014
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