2014.11.26

Tomorrow is Thanksgiving Day.
It is a second time that I spend Thanksgiving Day in the United States.
It is a huge holiday in the US so I can feel the holiday atmosphere everywhere.
Same as Korea, on holidays people spend time with their family.
I'm not American, so I don't need to celebrate Thanksgiving Day; but I want to experience various cultures, including holidays.
What should I do if I want to enjoy my Thanksgiving Day?
Um.... maybe there is a way to eat turkey... but unfortunately me and my husband just are two people who aren't enough to eat a whole turkey! What about pumkin pie... Oh, my husband does't like pumkin.
I'm going to just enjoy shopping on Black Friday!

2014.11.26

Tomorrow is the Thanksgiving Day.
It is athe second time that I will spend Thanksgiving Day in United States. ( the United States?) Yes, that is correct.
It is a huge holiday in the US so I can feel the holiday atmosphere in everywhere.
Same as Korea. On holiday, people spend a time with theretheir family. (Their is for ownership, there is for places)

I'm not American so I don't need to celebrate Thanksgivindg Day but I want to experience various cultures includesing holidays in here.
What should I do if I want to enjoy my Thanksgiving day?
Um.... maybe there is a way to eat turkey... but unfortunately,with me and my husband, just two are not enough to eat a whole turkey! What about pumkin pie... Oh, my husband does't like pumpkin.
I'm just gonna just enjoy shopping on Black Friday !

Very good! Your writing is much very good. Sounds very natural. Good job!