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Should English Major Study Math? ( I hope someone could help me correct this artucle) Recently,there is a topic about "Should Enlish Majors Study Math?" triggered heated debate.Some people reckon that math as an essential skill we should learn .It can cultivate some good habbits like attentiveness.However,another people believe that it is no need for English majors to study math.For me,I hold the opinion that English majors shouldn't study English. First and foremost,English majors are usually find a job as a translator or an English teacher.It is no need master good mathematical knowledge for what we have learned is enogh.In addition,those students who are not good at math will full of plesure and then may loss their confidence in learning English.Besides,study math will distract our attention from English.It is hard for us to keep balance between two subject and allocate time well.Last but not least,we don't let us learn more harm than good.It is better to use time learn English well instead of studying math badly. In conclusion,whatever I do,wherever I go,I stii hold the opinion that there is no use for English majors to study further math. The math we have learned is enough for usin our future life enen carrer.Therefore,just let us learn English more targeted.
Nov 27, 2014 4:31 AM
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Italki limits the size of replies.  Therefore I must add my comments separately.

 

[1] In your university essays, I recommend that you don't use the word 'reckon'. Use another word such as 'believe', 'consider', 'regard', 'think', 'contend', or any suitable synonym.

 

[2] The phrase is different depending on whether you're describing one other person or many other people:

"Another person believes that math is important."

"Other people believe that math is important."

 

[3] Sorry, but I don't understand your meaning here.

 

Remember to add a space (' ') after every comma (',') and full stop ('.').

November 27, 2014

Should English Majors Study Math? ( I hope someone could help me correct this artucle article)

Recently, there is was a topic about "Should English Majors Study Math?" which triggered heated debate.  Some people reckon [1] that math as is an essential skill we should learn .  It can cultivate some good habbits habits like attentiveness.  However, another other [2] people believe that it there is no need for English majors to study math.  For me, I hold the opinion that English majors shouldn't study English math.
First and foremost, English majors are will usually find a job as a translator or an English teacher.  It There is no need to master good mathematical knowledge for because what we have learned is enough.  In addition, those students who are not good at math will full of plesure feel the pressure and then may loss lose their confidence in learning English.  Besides, studying math will distract our attention from English.  It is hard for us to keep a balance between the two subjects and allocate time well.  Last but not least, we don't let us learn more harm than good [3].  It is better to use the time to learn English well instead of studying math badly poorly.
In conclusion, whatever I do, wherever I go, I stii still hold the opinion that there is no use for English majors to study further math. The math we have learned is enough for usin use in our future life enen carrer and career.  Therefore, just let us learn English more targeted focus on learning English.

November 27, 2014
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