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The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The first chart shows that the amount of all travelers that leave Japan to travel abroad. This chart It indicates the amount of Japanese traveling abroad generally increased between 1985 and 1995. We can see the number of Japanese that traveled outside their country was approximately 5 million in 1985 and that it rose to 15 million in 1995. The trend of the chart shows that the number of travelers decreased in 1991 and also that this amount was almost constant during 1992 to '93.
The second chart presents the percent of Japanese travelers that leave Japan to travel to Australia. By investigating this chart; we can see the amount of Japanese travelers that travel to Australia generally grew between 1885 and 1995. The chart shows this amount decreases in years 1989 and 1994. The trough of the chart is at 1885 by when it was about 2 percent of travelers and the peak of the chart is at 1993, which was a little more than 6 percent of all travelers.