Why dont you help others ?

Nowadays many people wouldn't like to hlep others or hlep others for money .I understand there are lots of the cheaters .I believe your family must be cheated .But it doesn't mean you refuse to help others .Only if you had been cheated by your wife ,you want to divorce .It proves you are not mature .dont be selfish .To help others , to make more friends ,to commucate with them ,you will find your world will change .

Why dont you help others ?
Nowadays many people wouldn't like to hlep others or hlep others for money. I understand that there are many  cheaters. I believe that your family must be cheated. But it doesn't mean that you refuse to help others. Only if you have  been cheated on by your wife would you want to divorce. It proves that you are not mature. Don't be selfish. To help others , to make more friends, to commucate with them, you will find that your world will change.

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