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I am wirtting this letter to request you to build a library for the criminals in Shawshank. Today's new sentences. I am wirtting this letter to request you to build a library for the criminals in Shawshank. (I like this movie. :)) Life has got much harder for young people because of the hike of price. Initially, we should try to understand each other. However, someone maintains that Feng is a beautiful girl. We need to have a more sustainable development business model. It is very easy for everyone to perceive what we have now, but it is quite difficult for anyone to conceive what the world will be in ten years. Numerous people in Chinese villages are influenced by the notion that only boys can take over the family business. I want to pose a question. Smartisian was expected to post threats to MIUI. I am positive it was an accident. Latiaos(辣条) made by subterranean mill are positively harmful. I propose a proposal to propose. ( via an American drama, but I can't remember. IPhone is preferable to any other phones. (Yes, I am a Phone Freak.) In the illustration, the author tries to convey a message that he loves sunflowers. The rainy day compound the difficulty of mountaineering. (compound the difficulty of something, this phrase was above me in the begining.) Thank you for correcting my grammar mistakes. :)
Nov 27, 2014 4:02 PM
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I am writing this letter to request you build a library for the criminals in Shawshank.

Today's new sentences:
I am writing this letter to request you build a library for the criminals in Shawshank. (I like this movie. :))
Life has gotten much harder for young people because of inflation.
Initially, we should try to understand each other.
However, someone maintains that Feng is a beautiful girl.
We need to have a more sustainable development business model.
It is very easy for everyone to perceive what we have now, but it is quite difficult for anyone to conceive what the world will be in ten years.
Numerous people in Chinese villages are influenced by the notion that only boys can take over the family business.
I want to pose a question.
Smartisian was expected to pose a threat to MIUI.
I am positive it was an accident.
Latiaos(辣条) made by subterranean mills are positively harmful. (<em>What are Latiaos</em>?)
"I propose a proposal to propose." ( I heard this phrase used in an American drama film/TV series, but I can't remember the name of the film/TV series in which this phrase was used.)
IPhone is preferable to any other phones. (Yes, I am a phone-freak.)
In the illustration, the author tries to convey a message that he loves sunflowers.
The rainy day compounds the difficulty of mountaineering. (compound the difficulty of something, this phrase was beyond me at the beginning.)




Thank you for correcting my grammar mistakes. :)

November 27, 2014

Hope you find these corrections helpful!:

I am writing this letter to request that you build a library for the criminals in Shawshank.

Life has gotten [become] much harder for young people because of the hike in [cost of living]. (Prices is too vague. Prices of what? Fuel? Food? "cost of living" is a general term.)

Latiaos(辣条) made by the subterranean mill are [definitely][very] harmful. (Positively isn't a common word in English. Try these other words.)

The iPhone is preferable to any other phones.

In the illustration, the author tries to convey the message that he loves sunflowers.

The rainy day compounds the difficulty of mountaineering.

 

Today's new sentences.
I am wirtting this letter to request you to build a library for the criminals in Shawshank. (I like this movie. :))
Life has got much harder for young people because of the hike of price.
Initially, we should try to understand each other.
However, someone maintains that Feng is a beautiful girl.
We need to have a more sustainable development business model.
It is very easy for everyone to perceive what we have now, but it is quite difficult for anyone to conceive what the world will be in ten years.
Numerous people in Chinese villages are influenced by the notion that only boys can take over the family business.
I want to pose a question.
Smartisian was expected to post threats to MIUI.
I am positive it was an accident.
Latiaos(辣条) made by subterranean mill are positively harmful.
I propose a proposal to propose. ( via an American drama, but I can't remember.
IPhone is preferable to any other phones. (Yes, I am a Phone Freak.)
In the illustration, the author tries to convey a message that he loves sunflowers.
The rainy day compound the difficulty of mountaineering. (compound the difficulty of something, this phrase was above me in the begining.)




Thank you for correcting my grammar mistakes. :)

November 27, 2014
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