my business trip I was in business trip two last days (maybe I ought to say "i had business trip two last days" ?). Me and two my co-workers visited Belgorod. That is nice city, quiet and clear. I saw

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my business trip I was in business trip two last days (maybe I ought to say "i had business trip two last days" ?). Me and two my co-workers visited Belgorod. That is nice city, quiet and clear. I saw it in contrast with Ufa - the city where I live. I understood that Ufa is rather uncleared (or dirty? I don't know difference) city thougth Ufa is bigger than Belgorod in two times almost. Some more differences between these two cities are traffic and buildings. There is mach more traffic jams in Ufa. Nobody likes it. In Belgorod the highest building have sixteen levels. I think the highest buikding in Ufa have nearly fourty levels. Tomorrow on the twenty eighth of november two thousand and fourteen we'll go home. We'll fly not right in Ufa. We'll have one transfer in Moskow. But now it is time to sleep for me. I ought to get up early.

Nov 27, 2014 8:23 PM

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Привет, Азамат, наконец.

I was in business trip two last days (maybe I ought to say "i had business trip two last days"?).

I was on a business trip the last two days. And yes, you can certainly say "I had a business (for) trip the last two days" or ,"I have been away on business for the last two days"

Me and two of my co-workers visited Belgorod. Which/It is a nice city, quiet and clean.

I saw it in contrast with Ufa - the city where I live. I understood that Ufa is rather uncleared (or dirty? I don't know difference) city thougth Ufa is bigger than Belgorod in two times almost.

I saw it in contrast with Ufa - the city where I live. I understood (наверно, более естественно так:) I saw/I realised that Ufa is a rather unclean (или да, dirty) city, though Ufa is bigger than Belgorod by almost two times / (лучшее:) is almost double/two times/twice the size of Belgorod.

Some more differences between these two cities are traffic and buildings. There are much (<em>are</em> тут соглашится множ. jams) more traffic jams in Ufa. Nobody likes it. In Belgorod the highest building has sixteen levels/stories/floors. I think the highest building in Ufa has nearly fourty levels.
Tomorrow on the twenty eighth of november two thousand and fourteen we'll go home. - Отлично. Хотя, даты пости никогда не написаны вуквами.

We'll fly not right in Ufa. We won't fly direct/directly to Ufa.

We'll have one transfer in Moskow.

But now it is time to sleep for me. I ought to get up early.

November 30, 2014

my business trip

I was on a business trip for the last two days. Me and two my co-workers visited Belgorod. It is nice city, quiet and clear. I saw it in contrast with Ufa - the city where I live. I understood that Ufa is a rather uncleared (or dirty? I don't know difference) city thougth Ufa is bigger than Belgorod. Almost two times its size.
Some more differences between these two cities are traffic and buildings. There are many more traffic jams in Ufa. Nobody likes it. In Belgorod the highest building has sixteen levels. I think the highest buikding in Ufa has nearly fourty levels.
Tomorrow on the twenty eighth of november two thousand and fourteen, we'll go home. We'll wont fly right to Ufa. We'll have one transfer in Moskow.
But now it is time to sleep for me. I ought to get up early.

November 30, 2014