Kim
A nice helper 好助手 I've been wanting to have a meat grinder because I worry about that the mince sold in the market is not clean. Through comparing prices, I found that the prices of Joyoung domestic mincer is ¥250 in the emporium but only ¥150 online. I odered it online. Two days later I received the goods by a courier. I bought 500 grams beef and cut it into 2 cm square blocks putting them into the grinder. I can't wait to see how about performing. Within a minute the mince have been finished and it would take me 20 minutes in the usual. The behavio of the meat grinder is excellent. Henceforth I have a nice helper in my kitchen. 因为担心外面卖的肉馅不干净,我一直想买一个绞肉机。我比较了一下价格,九阳牌的家用绞肉机商场卖250元,网上买150元。我在网上订购了一个。两天以后,货送到了。我买了一斤牛肉,切成两厘米见方的小块,放进绞肉机,迫不及待地想看看它的性能如何。不到一分钟,肉糜绞好了,平时用手剁要花费我20分钟,性能极佳。 从此,我的厨房里多了一位好帮手。
Nov 28, 2014 6:48 AM
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A nice helper

I've been wanting to have a meat grinder because I worry about that the mince sold in the market is not clean [1]. Through comparing prices, I found that the prices of a Joyoung domestic mincer is ¥250 in the emporium but only ¥150 online. I ordered it online. Two days later I received the goods by a courier. I bought 500 grams of beef and cut it into 2 cm square blocks, putting and put them into the grinder. I can't couldn't wait to see how about performing it performed. Within a minute the mince have had been finished, and when it would take have taken me 20 minutes in the usual way. The behavio performance of the meat grinder is excellent.

Henceforth I have a nice helper in my kitchen.

 

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[1] Do you mean 'fresh'?

 

Be careful with tenses, remembering that any story you tell will usually be in the past tense.  Other than tenses, you made very few mistakes.  Great job!

November 28, 2014
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