smelval
Can someone help with my notebook , please? Thanks Good day to you! How are you doing? hat's the weather is like? Here, it is very frosty and when you are outside your skin is tingling with cold air. I hope this letter finds you and yours in good health and in goot spirit. I came home about an hour ago. I ate some rice with red beans. Today I told my boss that soon I will have to go to the pre-trail hearing about my divorce. She said that I have toi write a speacil petition to the judge not to attend hearings. In our procesual we have such a choice but I have to warn them in advance. As for me , I was sure I would be advised to do it. Unfortunately, now I am suffering from bad behaviour from my daugher. She is throwing tantrum over any insignificant things. Yesterday I fell asleep in the vening and in several hours she started to wake me up. I explained her that I am tired and want to sleep but she wanted me to read her a fairy tales. I must go as I need to try to tidy up my room even though it is almost impossible as the room is poky and there are so much stuff. I hope my ex will not pay any visits to me as I do not want to see his sneering face. Take care and stay warm.
Nov 28, 2014 10:47 AM
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Can someone help with my notebook , please? Thanks

Good day to you!
How are you doing? What's the weather is like? Here, it is very frosty and when you are outside your skin is tingling with the cold air. I hope this letter finds you and yours in good health and in good spirits.
I came home about an hour ago. I ate some rice with red beans.
Today I told my boss that soon I will have to go to the pre-trail hearing about my divorce. She said that I have toi write a speacil special petition to the judge not to attend hearings. In our procesual [1] we have such a choice but I have to warn them in advance. As for me , I was sure I would be advised to do it.
Unfortunately, now I am suffering from the bad behaviour from of my daugher. She is throwing a tantrum over any insignificant things. Yesterday I fell asleep in the evening and in after several hours she started to wake me up. I explained to her that I am was tired and wanted to sleep but she wanted me to read her a fairy tales.
I must go as I need to try to tidy up my room even though it is almost impossible as the room is poky [2] and there are is [3] so much stuff.
I hope my ex will not pay any visits to me as I do not want to see his sneering face.
Take care and stay warm.

 

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[1] This is not a word, and I can't guess what you might have meant here.

[2] Most native speakers would not recognize this word, and would instead write 'cramped'.

[3] The word 'stuff' uses the singular form, even if it represents many things.

 

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Great job, smelval.  Your writing is improving very quickly.

November 28, 2014

Can someone help with my notebook , please? Thanks

Good day to you!
How are you doing? What's the weather like? Here, it is very frosty and when you're outside your skin tingles with cold air. I hope this letter finds you and yours in good health and in good spirit.
I came home about an hour ago. I ate some rice with red beans.
Today I told my boss that soon I will have to go to the pre-trail hearing about my divorce. She said that I have toi write a speacil petition to the judge not to attend hearings. In our procesual we have such a choice but I have to warn them in advance. As for me , I was sure I would be advised to do it.
Unfortunately, now I am suffering from the bad behaviour of my daugher. She is throwing tantrums over many insignificant things. Yesterday I fell asleep in the vening and in several hours she started to wake me up. I explained to her that I am tired and want to sleep but she wanted me to read her a fairy tales.
I must go as I need to try to tidy up my room even though it is almost impossible as the room is poky and there is so much stuff.
I hope my ex will not pay any visits to me as I do not want to see his sneering face.
Take care and stay warm.

November 28, 2014
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