Could you correct this and make sure it sounds good? Thank you very much!! I'm a lover of music, writing and arts in general, I start my official guitar studies when I'm 8 years old, although I starte

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Could you correct this and make sure it sounds good? Thank you very much!! I'm a lover of music, writing and arts in general, I start my official guitar studies when I'm 8 years old, although I started to play it at the early age of 4 years old, and never abandoning it since that moment. Once I finish my Bachelor of Social Science, I determined to continue on the road I started on the first place some years earlier, following my musical education on the superior conservatory of London, under the specialty of guitar, obtaining the title of Graduate with Honours. My formation isn't only about music, I combine it with a continuous learning about Marketing and Content Writing, participatin in several courses about creative writing, seo positioning, couching and community manager between others.

Nov 28, 2014 9:06 PM

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Could you correct this and make sure it sounds good? Thank you very much!!

I'm a lover of music, writing and arts in general. I started my official guitar studies when I'm was 8 years old, although I started to play it at the early age of 4 years old, and I have never abandoned it since that moment.

Once I finish my Bachelor of Social Science, I will determined to continue on the road I started on the first place some years earlier. Thus following my musical education to the superior conservatory of London, under the specialty of guitar, and obtaining the title of Graduate with Honours.

My formation isn't only about music, I combine it with a continuous learning about Marketing, and Content Writing, participatin in several courses about creative writing, seo positioning, coaching and community managing between others.