Hello!

Hi everybody, my name is Raphael and my goal here is <em>to </em>pra<em>c</em>tice my <em>E</em>nglish. I never have made any english <em>I've never taken an English </em>course <em>before</em>,<em>.</em> i <em>I </em>just listening <em>listen to </em>musics, watch movies and play games.
Because <em>of </em>that, my <em>E</em>nglish grammar is not good, <em>and I</em> have some difficulties in <em>with </em>many verbs.

Today, in this notebook, <em>I</em> will write about me and all the stufs <em>stuff I</em> do. If you see anything wrong, let me know.

I'm a mechanical engineering student, have <em>I'm </em>twenty seven years <em>old </em>and now, <em>I</em>'m searching for a<em>n</em> internship in a big company. The <em>E</em>nglish language is required for all big companies, so, <em>I</em> need to learn <em>it</em>!

I have a girlfriend, <em>who is also an </em>engineer<em>ing</em> student to<em>.</em> <em>I</em>n my free time<em>,</em> <em>I</em> like play mountainbike <em>mountain biking</em>, travel<em>ing</em> and cooking.
I like to go in the gym and now i start to play/fight boxe <em>I'm starting to box</em>.

Thank's <em>Thanks</em>

G<em>ood job. Some tips:</em>

1<em>. The word "English" and the pronoun "I" must always be capitalized, wherever they appear.</em>

<em></em><em>2. Never use the verb "to have" for age. Use "to be."</em>

Hello!

Hi everybody, my name is Raphael, and my goal here is to practice my english. I never have never made attended/taken any english courses, i just listening to musics, watch movies and playing games.
Because of that, my english grammar is not good, and i have some difficulties in with many verbs.

Today, in this notebook, i will write about me and all the stuffs I do. If you see anything wrong, let me know.

I'm a mechanical engineering student. have I am twenty seven years old, and now I'm searching for an internship in a big company. The english language is required for all big companies, so i need to learn! 

I have a girlfriend, an engineering student too. In my free time i like play to mountain bike, travel and cooking.
I like to go in the gym and now i have now started to play/ boxing.

Thanks

Notes:

Too= As well, and usually goes at the end of the sentence. 

You use to before verbs, to have, to go, to sleep :P

Very nicely done though :)

Hello!

Hi everybody, my name is Raphael and my goal here is to practice my english. I have never taken any english courses. i just listen to music, watch movies and play games.
Because of that, my english grammar is not good; i have some difficulties in many verbs.

Today, in this notebook, i will write about myself and all the stuff i do. If you see anything wrong, let me know.

I'm a mechanical engineering student. i am twenty seven years old. now, i'm searching for an internship in a big company. The english language is required for all big companies, so, i need to learn!

I have a girlfriend who is an engineering student too. in my free time, i like to mountain bike, travel and cook.
I also like to go to the gym and now i have started to do boxing.

Thanks.