Jessica
On 2 Dec 2014 Today is tuesday,I got up at 8:00.It's a sunny day,so I decided to clean my room.Firstly, I washed my clothes,and then tidied my room,especially my desk ,In the end I mopped the floor.I ate noodle for lunch,it was delicious。I like noodles in soup.And in the afternoon,I studied Korean myself.I have been learning Korean since two years ago.I think it's a funny language.I hope I can teache Chinese in Korea someday!
Dec 2, 2014 2:55 PM
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On 2nd Dec 2014

Today is Tuesday - I got up at 8am/8 o'clock, and saw that it is a sunny day, so I decided to clean my room. Firstly, I washed my clothes, and then tidied my room, especially/particularly <em>(can't explain clearly why - specially I use for something GOOD or BAD but non-specific - here you are pointing to one particular item, the desk)</em> my desk. In the end To finish with/Finally, I mopped the floor.  Then for lunch I ate noodles for lunch, it <em>('it' is ok - refers to lunch)</em> was delicious。I like noodles in/noodles with/noodle <em>(no plural here! it - noodle soup - is like an adjective) </em>soup. And In the afternoon, I studied Korean by myself/alone. I have been learning <em>(present perfect continuous)</em> Korean since I started two years ago/for the last two years. <em>(since needs a specific point in time, 'two years ago' is too indefinite)</em> I started learning Korean two years ago, and have been studying ever since then. I think it's a funny? fun language to learn. I hope I can teach Chinese in Korea some day!

 

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December 22, 2014

On the 2nd of December, 2014

Today is Tuesday, I got up at 8:00. It's a sunny day, so I decided to clean my room. Firstly, I washed my clothes; and then tidied up my room, especially my desk. In the end, I mopped the floor. I ate noodles for lunch, it was delicious. I like noodles in soup. And in the afternoon, I studied Korean myself. I have been learning Korean since two years ago. I think it's a fun language. I hope I can teach Chinese in Korea someday!

December 3, 2014
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