The plot ot the series Warehouse 13 Part 2

PART TWO OF THE PLOT OF THE SERIES WAREHOUSE 13

At the beginning of this episode, we could see Myka and Pete standing in the warehouse defending against some lightning bolts. They used with an indian elephant artefact, which is was able to absorb the energy of the lightning bolts. During this attack, a manuscript were lifted up (tell the reader who lifted it up) in the air and as the pages of the manuscripts touchesd the floor, Myka and Pete suddenly appeared in a black and white world in the forties. They were confused and had absolutely no idea where they arewere and why they have had landed in this bizarre world dressed with in forties clothes. But more important was the question, which they asked themselves, how to hell they should could they get back into their own world and time. To solve this riddle, Myka and Pete decided to explore the world to which they had just been transportedin they have been living now. Soon they have explored that discovered they havehad been captured in the manuscript itself and that the only way to get out of exists thereinwas to complete the story of this unfinished novel. To achieve this goal, they looked for the author himself, who was also captured in his own novel. Finally, they had to solve a the secret of a homicide investigation, in which the author himself was embroiled, to foundfind out that the real reason why the novel hasn’thadn't been finished yet iswas that the author of thisthe manuscript hashad begun to write a crime novel, but in fact was grieving about an old flame that he hashad lost. (Consider breaking this long sentence into two shorter ones.) Once Myka and Pete had helped the author to become aware of this circumstance, he was able to finish his manuscript more as a romantic novel rather than as of a crime novel and all,. Myka, Pete and the aAuthor himself, were able to get out of this surreal world through a magical portal that appeared next to them.

In the last scene of this episode we could see that Myka and Pete arewere back in the warehouse and the now finished novel willwould be securely stored thereinside the warehouse.

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Peter,

Well done!  Your written English is easy to understand.  Also, your spelling is very good.  My principle recommendation is that you be sure to maintain consistent verb tense throughout your sentences. When you're telling your story in past tense, try to avoid slipping into present tense. This is important in English.  (Some English speakers occasionally get it wrong in their own writing.)

I enjoyed reading your plot summary. Keep up the good work!

Chris

The plot ot the series Warehouse 13 Part 2

PART TWO OF THE PLOT OF THE SERIES WAREHOUSE 13

At the beginning of this episode, we could see saw Myka and Pete standing in the warehouse defending it against some lightning bolts with an Indian elephant artefact, which is able to absorb the energy of the lightning bolts. During this attack, a manuscript were was lifted up in the air, and as the pages of the manuscripts touched the floor, Myka and Pete suddenly appeared in a black and white world in the forties (or 1940s). They were confused and had absolutely no idea where they are were and why they have landed in this bizarre world dressed with in forties 1940s clothing. But more important was the question, which that they asked themselves, how to the hell should (or could) they should get back in their own world and time. To solve this riddle, Myka and Pete decided to explore the world in which they were now have been living now. Soon they have explored (realized/discovered?) that they have been were captured in the manuscript itself, and that the only way to get out was to of exists therein to complete the story of this unfinished novel. To achieve this goal they looked for the author himself, who was also captured in his own novel. Finally, they had to solve a secret of a homicide investigation, in which the author himself was embroiled. (need a new sentence here) , We learn We to found out that the real reason why the novel hasn’t been finished yet is that the author (of this manuscript) had begun to write a crime novel, but in fact was grieving about an old flame that he has lost. (These sentences are a little awkward; it might be better to separate the thoughts into smaller sentences). Once Myka and Pete had helped the author to become aware of this circumstance, he was able to finish his manuscript more as a romantic novel rather than as of a crime novel, and all of them, Myka, Pete and the author himself, were able to get out of this surreal world through a magical portal that appeared next to them.

In the last scene of this episode we could see saw that Myka and Pete are were back in the warehouse and the now finished novel will be securely stored inside the warehouse.

END OF THE PLOT

The major issue here is the verb tenses.  Good job.