Julia
Well, I have to compare two photos about cars... Cars are an essential part of many people's lives nowadays. Since their appearance many things have changed. Travelling from one place to another became easier and faster. And now I'd like to compare two picture which show cars. In the first picture you can see a nice day in a city. A huge number of cars is in a traffic jam. May be owners of these cars are very angry and nervous. Nobody likes traffic james. But, in general, the photo looks like brightly and beautiful. In the second picture you can see a parking. There are twenty or a little bit more cars there. In the photo it is a sunny day. Both photos are on the subject of cars. These photos show a part of city fussy life. In comparision to the second picture, the first picture is more rich in colors. I think that the first picture was made by professional photographer, while the another photo was made by ordinary person. Besides in the photo number one there are much more cars than in the photo number two. As for me, I like the first picture because, I have already said, this photo is very colorful and expressive.
Dec 14, 2014 1:54 PM
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Well, I have to compare two photos about cars...

Cars are an essential part of many people's lives nowadays. Since their appearance many things have changed. Travelling from one place to another has become easier and faster. And now I'd like to compare two picture which show cars.

In the first picture you can see a nice day in a city. A huge number of cars is in a traffic jam. Maybe owners of these cars are very angry and nervous. Nobody likes traffic james. But, in general, the photo looks like brightly and beautiful.

In the second picture you can see a car parking. There are twenty or a little bit more cars there. In the photo it is a sunny day.

Both photos are on the subject of cars. These photos show a part of city fussy life. In comparision to the second picture, the first picture is more rich in colors. I think that the first picture was made by a professional photographer, while the another photo was made by an ordinary person. Besides, in the first photo number one there are much many more cars than in the second photo number two.
As For me, I like prefer the first picture because, as I have already said, this photo is very colourful and expressive.

 

English: car park = American: parking lot

You can say: "There are twenty or so cars ..." or "There are around twenty cars ..."

Good work, Julia.

December 14, 2014
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Well, I have to compare two photos about cars...

Cars [automobiles] are an essential part of many people's lives nowadays. Since their appearance many things have changed. Travelling from one place to another became easier and faster. And now I'd like to compare two pictures which show cars.

In the first picture, you can see a highway in a city on a nice day in a city. There are  a huge number of cars [vehicles]  is in a traffic jam. Maybe the drivers owners of these cars and trucks are very angry and nervous. Nobody likes traffic jams. But, in general, the photo looks like brightly and beautiful.

In the second picture you can see a parking lot. There are about twenty or a little bit more cars there. In the photo It is a sunny day.

Both photos are on the subject of about cars. These photos show a part of busy city fussy life. In comparision to the second picture, the first picture is more richer in colors. [If you spell it <em>colors [US], </em>not <em>colours [UK], </em>it is a <em>parking lot,</em> not a <em>car park</em>.] I think that the first picture was made by professional photographer, while the another photo was made by an ordinary person. Besides, in the first photo number one there are many more cars than in the second. photo number two.
As for me, I like the first picture because, as I have already said, this photo it is very colorful and expressive.

 

Yes, good work. Consider using synonyms like <em>auto, automobile, </em>or <em>vehicle </em>so you don't keep repeating the word <em>car.</em>

 

December 18, 2014
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