Blanca Moretón
TRUST OR NOT TRUST I am going to talk about confidence between couples. We were born been liars and we will die been liars. For instance, in the case of Miss Sutherland, her stepfather lied her for money. He did that she fell in love with him and then he disappeared. What kind of person would do that? A real liar! She fell in love but it was not her fault. Everybody could fall in love with a person like that, she just had bad luck because everything was a lie. When she did not know what was happening she went to see a detective (Sherlock Holmes), it was the best way to know the truth. I think that we fall in love we lose our mind. We feel that the other person will never disappear and will never lie, that person will always be there, we got faith. Unfortunately this is not real, in a couple there are always secrets and jealousy. There are two really bad things but they have to exist, if not, everything would be perfect and boring. We need our space, take decisions for ourselves, we need to do what we want without the other person. It is easy, living our life. I said something about secrets and jealousy, there are complicated issues but there are something funny, the excuses. For example: -Girl: Where were you this afternoon? -Boy: I was watching the football in George´s house -Girl: I don´t believe you, I will call him. -Boy: No!, you can´t call him because he will be sleeping -Girl: It can´t be. It is too soon. -Boy: Ok, he will be busy making the dinner. -Girl: Tell me the truth right now. I know that something is happening. -Boy: I can´t, you have to wait. -Girl: If you don´t tell me where were you, I will kill you. -Boy: Ok, I was buying a present for you. -Girl: Where is it? -Boy: It is here. -Girl: Show me it. -Boy: Would you like to get marry with me? That only happens in romantic films. Normally these situations finish really bad. Perhaps if the couple is really in love they decided to have a second choice but it will never be the same. You can fed up or sick. To conclude, I don´t know what is the solution for couples can be happy forever. I just know that I will try not lie, trust my boyfriend, ask him if I have doubts, do things for myself and never be unfaithful. Maybe I would get marry for money but this is another story.
Dec 14, 2014 5:07 PM
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TRUST OR NOT TRUST

I am going to talk about confidence between couples.
We were born been as liars and we will die been as liars.
For instance, in the case of Miss Sutherland, her stepfather lied to her for money. He did that until she fell in love with him and then he disappeared. What kind of person would do that? A real liar!
She fell in love but it was not her fault. Everybody could fall in love with a person like that, she just had bad luck because everything was a lie.
When she did not know what was happening she went to see a detective (Sherlock Holmes), it was the best way to know the truth.
I think that when we fall in love we lose our mind. We feel that the other person will never disappear and will never lie, that person will always be there, we got have faith.
Unfortunately this is not real, in between a couple there are always secrets and jealousy. There They are two really bad things but they have to exist, if not, everything would be perfect and boring.
We need our space, take decisions for ourselves, we need to do what we want without the other person. It is easy, living our life.
I said something about secrets and jealousy, there they are complicated issues but there are something funny  some funny things, the excuses.
For example:
-Girl: Where were you this afternoon?
-Boy: I was watching the football in George´s house
-Girl: I don´t believe you, I will call him.
-Boy: No!, you can´t call him because he will be sleeping
-Girl: It can´t be. It is too soon early.
-Boy: Ok, he will be busy making the dinner.
-Girl: Tell me the truth right now. I know that something is happening.
-Boy: I can´t, you have to wait.
-Girl: If you don´t tell me where were you, I will kill you.
-Boy: Ok, I was buying a present for you.
-Girl: Where is it?
-Boy: It is here.
-Girl: Show me it.
-Boy: Would you like to get marry with me?

That only happens in romantic films.
Normally these situations finish really badly. Perhaps if the couple is really in love they decided to have a second choice chance but it will never be the same. You can get fed up or sick.

To conclude, I don´t know what is the solution for couples can to be happy forever. I just know that I will try not to lie, trust my boyfriend, ask him if I have doubts, do things for myself and never be unfaithful.
Maybe I would get marry married for money but this is another story.

 

Very good.

Just one other comment: When you shorten "can not" or "do not", it becomes can't or don't (with no spaces)

December 21, 2014
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