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Children's book translation #1: "I'll Teach My Dog a Lot of Words" by Michael Frith 这本书真的很长!我一定犯了很多错误,请你们帮我指出一下,谢谢! I’ll Teach My Dog a Lot of Words 我会教我的狗很多生词 The first words I will teach my pup are… 我首先要教我狗的一些生词是。。。 dig a hole! And fill it up! 挖洞!和 把洞装满泥土! I’ll teach him walk. I’ll teach him run… 我会教它走路。我会教它跑步。。。 then catch a ball! We’ll sure have fun. 然后会教它接球!我们一定会玩得很开心。 Then I’ll teach him bark and beg, 然后我要教它咬 和 讨饭, wag your tail and shake a leg… 摇尾巴 和 抖一抖腿。。。 wash your ears and wash your toes! 洗耳朵 和 洗脚趾头! Scratch your head and blow your nose! 抓你的头 和 擤鼻涕! I’ll teach him big, I’ll teach him small… 我会教它大,我会教它小。。。 and fat and thin and short and tall… 和 瘦、胖、矮、高。。。 and dark and light and day and night. 和 黑、亮、白天、夜晚。 I’ll teach him chase the cat and climb the tree 我会教它追逐猫 和 爬上树 eat your food and follow me. 吃你的饭 和 跟着我。 I’ll teach him red and blue and green 我会教它红色、蓝色、绿色 A dog like this you’ve never seen! 你以前没看过这样的狗! I’ll teach him orange, purple, pink, 我会教它橙色、紫色、粉色、 But he can still learn more, I think. 不过我觉得它能学习更多的事情! I’ll teach my dog to paint a chair! 我要教我的狗怎么油漆椅子! Then paint the road from here to there. 然后再把马路漆从这里到那里。 (He’ll even paint some underwear!) (他甚至会把内衣油漆一下!) Cut the grass! Shine my shoes! 打草!刷鞋! Kiss the goose! And clean the zoo! 吻一吻大雁!把动物园清洗一下! But that’s not all my dog will do. 但是我没说完它会做的事情! He’ll toot a bugle… beat a drum. 它会吹小号,还会打鼓。 He’ll stand on top of someone’s thumb. 它会站在人家的拇指上。 And then he’ll learn to sing with birds. 然后他会学好唱小鸟的歌。 Now there! He knows a lot of words. 你看!它现在知道的词语真不少。
Dec 16, 2014 9:30 PM
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Children's book translation #1: "I'll Teach My Dog a Lot of Words" by Michael Frith

这本书真的很长!我一定犯了很多错误,请你们帮我修改指出一下,谢谢!

I’ll Teach My Dog a Lot of Words 我教我的狗很多生词

The first words I will teach my pup are… 我首先要教我狗的一些生词是。。。
dig a hole! And fill it up! 挖洞!和填洞 把洞装满泥土
I’ll teach him walk. I’ll teach him run… 我教它走路。我教它奔跑跑步。。。
then catch a ball! We’ll sure have fun. 然后还要教它接球!我们一定会玩得很开心。

Then I’ll teach him bark and beg, 然后我要教它汪汪叫讨好主人讨饭
wag your tail and shake a leg… 摇尾巴 和 抖一抖腿。。。
wash your ears and wash your toes! 洗耳朵 和 洗脚趾头!
Scratch your head and blow your nose!抓你的头 和 打响鼻

I’ll teach him big, I’ll teach him small… 我会教它大,我会教它小。。。
and fat and thin and short and tall… 瘦、胖、矮、高。。。
and dark and light and day and night.  、白天、夜晚。

I’ll teach him chase the cat and climb the tree 我会教它追猫 和 爬
eat your food and follow me. 吃你的饭 和 跟着我。
I’ll teach him red and blue and green 我会教它红色、蓝色、绿色
A dog like this you’ve never seen! 这样的狗你以前没看过这样的狗
I’ll teach him orange, purple, pink, 我会教它橙色、紫色、粉色、
But he can still learn more, I think. 不过我觉得它能学习更多的事情!

I’ll teach my dog to paint a chair! 我要教我的狗怎么油漆椅子!
Then paint the road from here to there. 然后再把马路从这边粉刷到那
(He’ll even paint some underwear!) (他甚至会把内衣油漆一下!)

Cut the grass! Shine my shoes! 草!刷鞋!
Kiss the goose! And clean the zoo! 吻一吻大雁!动把物园清洗动物园一下! 

But that’s not all my dog will do. 但是我没说完它会做的事情!

He’ll toot a bugle… beat a drum. 它会吹小号,还会打鼓。
He’ll stand on top of someone’s thumb. 它会站在人家的拇指上。
And then he’ll learn to sing with birds. 此外它然后会学着和小鸟一起唱歌。
Now there! He knows a lot of words. 你看!它现在知道的词语真不少。

 

 

 

Is that a dog? 那是狗吗?

January 12, 2015

Children's book translation #1: "I'll Teach My Dog a Lot of Words" by Michael Frith

这本书真的很长!我一定犯了很多错误,请你们帮我指出一下,谢谢!

I’ll Teach My Dog a Lot of Words 我会教我的狗很多生词

The first words I will teach my pup are… 我首先要教我狗的一些生词是。。。
dig a hole! And fill it up! 挖洞!和 把洞装满泥土!
I’ll teach him walk. I’ll teach him run… 我会教它走路。我会教它跑步。。。
then catch a ball! We’ll sure have fun. 然后会教它接球!我们一定会玩得很开心。

Then I’ll teach him bark and beg, 然后我要教它 讨饭  乞求

wag your tail and shake a leg… 摇尾巴 和 抖一抖腿。。。
wash your ears and wash your toes! 洗耳朵 和 洗脚趾头!
Scratch your head and blow your nose! 抓你的头 和 擤鼻涕!

I’ll teach him big, I’ll teach him small… 我会教它大,我会教它小。。。
and fat and thin and short and tall… 和 瘦、胖、矮、高。。。
and dark and light and day and night. 和 、亮、白天、夜晚。

I’ll teach him chase the cat and climb the tree 我会教它追逐猫 和 爬上树
eat your food and follow me. 吃你的饭 和 跟着我。
I’ll teach him red and blue and green 我会教它红色、蓝色、绿色
A dog like this you’ve never seen! 你以前没看过这样的狗!
I’ll teach him orange, purple, pink, 我会教它橙色、紫色、粉色、
But he can still learn more, I think. 不过我觉得它能学习更多的事情!

I’ll teach my dog to paint a chair! 我要教我的狗怎么油漆椅子!
Then paint the road from here to there. 然后再把马路漆从这里到那里。
(He’ll even paint some underwear!) (他甚至会把内衣油漆一下!)

Cut the grass! Shine my shoes! 打草!刷鞋!
Kiss the goose! And clean the zoo! 吻一吻大雁!把动物园清洗一下!
But that’s not all my dog will do. 但是我没说完它会做的事情!

He’ll toot a bugle… beat a drum. 它会吹小号,还会打鼓。
He’ll stand on top of someone’s thumb. 它会站在人家的拇指上。
And then he’ll learn to sing with birds. 然后他会学好唱小鸟的歌。
Now there! He knows a lot of words. 你看!它现在知道的词语真不少。

December 17, 2014
You have to make it Rhyme and scan too!!! 嘻嘻嘻
January 12, 2015
I like the rhythm of your English. It's almost poetic.
January 11, 2015
“words”在这里翻译为知识(knowledge)或者事情(matter)更好。
December 19, 2014
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