Amir Tenizbayev
third part of my writing My entrepreneurship 1) My wife good in preparing cakes and other things, I asked her to prepare pancakes, all prepared pancakes were sold. 2) We are living in Astana in an apartment which is owned by my father at law. I asked him if I went to a smaller one room and make an advertisement to the newspaper for his apartment, he decide to allow me to give his apartment to families who needed apartment to rent. 3) I was studying English language at InterPress International House Language School and found interesting article in book, I found that there is a problem when somebody driven old car which is not having hands free device in it, and I started searching devices which allow people not touching their mobile phones receive phone calls, and I order some quantity for test my idea. So for this moment I sold more than twenty LG devices and making profit for them. Now I have enough money to take English language lessons from professional native teacher on ITALKI.com.
Dec 17, 2014 11:13 AM
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third part of my writing

My entrepreneurship
1) My wife is good in at preparing cakes and other things, so  I asked her to make pancakes, all the  pancakes were then sold.
2) We are living in Astana in an apartment which is owned by my father in law. I asked him if I moved to a smaller one room and placed an advertisement in  the newspaper for his apartment, could he allow me to rent his apartment to families who needed an apartment. 
3) I was studying English language at InterPress International House Language School and found an interesting article in a book, I found that there is a problem when somebody is driving an  old car which is  does not have a hands free device in it.  I started searching devices which allow people not to touch their mobile phones when receiving  phone calls, and I order some to  test my idea. So at this moment I  have sold more than twenty LG devices and  I am making a profit from them.
Now I have enough money to take English language lessons from a professional native teacher on ITALKI.com.

December 17, 2014
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