A spanish village
Today I would like to talk about my home town called Poblete. Poblete is a beautifull village near Ciudad Real -a small spanish town. We're only 2000 citiziens aproximately, and by for that reason the life here is really calm and safe. The landscape in Poblete is pretty fantastic because there's a hermitage in at the top of a hill where the Poblete's citiziens used to go (<em>or</em> usually go) in March for to celebrate the local party (festival?). Moreover, in this village the people is are quite friendly and everybody knows each other and always tries to help to in their neighborhoods.
If one day you travel to Spain, you would should visit my village! I'm sure that you won't regret it! :)
Ta-ta for now!
Very good. I tend to make my corrections without looking at other people's corrections, and I see that my suggestions match with those of Michael.
A Spanish village
Today I would like to talk about my home town which is called Poblete. Poblete is a beautifull village near Ciudad Real -a small Spanish town. Poblete has only 2000 citiziens approximately and, for that reason, the life here is really calm and safe. The landscape in Poblete is pretty fantastic because there's a hermitage at the top of a hill where the Poblete's citiziens used to go / usually go in March to celebrate the? local festival. Moreover, in this village the people are quite friendly; everybody knows each other and they always try to help to their neighbors.
If, one day you travel to Spain, you should visit my village! I'm sure that you won't regret it! :)
Bye for now!
<em>"Ta-ra" is great and we would enjoy hearing you say this in England but it's really informal and I don't think every English-speaking country uses it. </em>
<em>Remember capitals for countries, peoples and languages.</em>
<em>Check my punctuation changes.</em>
<em>I would say something more about "the local festival" to describe it. Or just say "a local festival" if you want to keep the text simple.</em>
<em>"I used to go" means a different thing to "I usually go". I didn't know what you meant in your text.</em>
<em>Well done and keep up the good work! Michael </em>
