Good or Not from the Thchnological Progress Technological progress in the last century brought planty of contribution to people's life . such as the filed of work ,life ad communication. we obtain th

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Good or Not from the Thchnological Progress Technological progress in the last century brought planty of contribution to people's life . such as the filed of work ,life ad communication. we obtain the conveniece from the technology. people get used to utilize computer and ipad to work more efficiently. besides we can get checkup from the high technological health machinery.we can also get communication with long distance friends by line interact apps. However ,technological progress also perform a role on contrary. people rely on the high technology more and more ,several different ancient cultuals are being forgot ,especially youngeter who are the major power to transfer the excellent cultuals,but for the present, they are forgetting because the high thchnology.even though we have high technology healthy machine,we also cannot ignore the operation accidents under that kinds high technology,which makes some people couldn't bear the sorrow from it . as to long distance friends,they are communication with delight,but with the high technology devloping ,the interact with close relationship is decreasing.individuals is more lonely even in a big population city. But frankly speaking,I doubt there are many people have the willing go back to the pre-technology era ,my conclusion is that thchnology has changed our style of our life ,only take mesures to pay attention to what we need to .In additon , don't overrely on the high technology,we can live more nature and own a health relationship.

Dec 18, 2014 10:26 AM

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I understood your text pretty well and I agree about your thoughts. We should pay much more attention to our real relationships, but technologies help us a lot.

December 18, 2014

Good or Not from the Thchnological Progress

Technological progress in the last century brought planty of contribution to people's life . such as the filed of work ,life and communication. we obtain the conveniece from the technology. people get used to utilizing the computer and ipad to work more efficiently. besides we can get checkup from the high technological health machinery.we can also get communication with long distance friends by line interact apps.
However ,technological progress also performs a role which on contrary. people rely on the high technology more and more ,several different ancient cultuals are being forgot ,especially youngster who are the major power to transfer the excellent cultuals,but for the present, they are forgetting because of the high thchnology.even though we have high technology healthy machine,we also cannot ignore the operation accidents under that kinds of high technology,which makes some people couldn't bear the sorrow from it . as to long distance friends,they are able to communicate with each other delightly,but with the high technology devloping ,the interact with close relationship is decreasing.individual is more lonely even in a big population city.
But frankly speaking,I doubt there are many people have the willing go back to the pre-technology era ,my conclusion is that technology has changed our style of our life ,only take mesures to pay attention to what we need to could your life changes a little.In additon , don't over rely on the high technology,we can live more nature and own a health relationship.

December 18, 2014

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