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HELP!!!!!!A COMPOSITION FOR A CONTEST!!!!! Help me please!!!!! Tomorrow i must hand on a composition for a contest on the web. But now i have to go over for tomorrow‘s Monthly exam. THANKS A LOT!!!!!!! ================================================================================= Most of people think that the wealth and fame are the things that support them to pursue their dreams. But I don’t think so. In my opinion, the wealth and fame just a result or a symbol after you achieve your goals. And the people who work hard from their heart have really happiness. In my memory, Marie Curie is such a person. She studied in chemistry and physics. She was the first person honored with two Nobel Prizes. She was the first female professor at the University of Paris. But she never valued the fame. Although she could enjoyed any reward of her achievement. But she didn’t. She donated it to scientific research and French. She also put those medals to her 6-year-old daughter to play. What a special person! Maybe it seems stupid, but it’s interesting and challenging to her to research in her study. Nothing could be more important than do the things she liked. Therefore she could be succeeded with her love and satisfaction. That’s a successful example to pursue one’s dream with happiness and fulfillment. And there are also lots of examples like this. In the same, most of people only care of how to earn more and more money to express they are rich and successful. I’m sure that a part of them really achieved their goal. But were they happy when they get what they want? How many people want to get the wealth and fame around the world? How many people finally achieve it? Be carefully you will find that, a majority of successful people did things that they’d like to do. So sense of happiness and fulfillment are the really motivation for one’s achievement rather than wealth and fame. In the end, just enjoy the thing you love and you will be successful.
Dec 18, 2014 1:55 PM
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HELP!!!!!!A COMPOSITION FOR A CONTEST!!!!!

Help me please!!!!! Tomorrow i must hand on a composition for a contest on the web. But now i have to go over for tomorrow‘s Monthly exam. THANKS A LOT!!!!!!!
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Most of people think that the wealth and fame are the things that support them when to pursuing their dreams. But I don’t think so. In my opinion, the wealth and fame are just a result or a symbol after you have achieved your goals. And The people who work hard from with all their heart have really happiness.
In my memory, Marie Curie is such a person. She studied in chemistry and physics. She was the first person honored with two Nobel Prizes. She was the first female professor at the University of Paris. But she never valued the fame. Although she could have enjoyed almost any reward of for her achievements, still But she didn’t. She donated it them to scientific research and France. She also put gave those medals to her 6-year-old daughter to play with. What a special person! Maybe it seems stupid, but it’s interesting and challenging to her to research in her study. Nothing could be more important than to do the things she liked/enjoyed doing. Therefore she could be achieve success eded with through her love and satisfaction.
That’s a successful example to of pursuing one’s dream with and achieving happiness and fulfillment. And There are also lots of many examples like this. In the same, However most of people only care of about how to earn more and more money and becoming to express they are rich and successful. I’m sure that a part of them really achieved their goal, but were they truly happy when they got what they wanted? How many people want to get the wealth and fame around the world? How many people finally achieve it? Be Consider carefully you will find that whether a majority of successful people did things that they’d like to do. So sense of happiness and fulfillment are the really motivations for one’s achievement rather than wealth and fame.
In the end, just enjoy the thing you love and you will be successful.

December 18, 2014
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HELP!!!!!!A COMPOSITION FOR A CONTEST!!!!!

Help me please!!!!! Tomorrow i must hand on a composition for a contest on the web. But now i have to go over for tomorrow‘s Monthly exam. THANKS A LOT!!!!!!!
=================================================================================
Most of people think that the wealth and fame are the things that support encourage them to pursue their dreams, but I don’t think so.  In my opinion, the wealth and fame are just a result or a symbol after you achieve your goals, and the people who work hard from their heart have really happiness  put their heart into their work have true happiness. 
In my memory, Marie Curie is such a person. She studied in chemistry and physics. She was the first person honored with two Nobel Prizes. She was the first female professor at the University of Paris. But she never valued the fame. Although she could enjoyed any reward of her achievement. But she didn’t. She donated it to scientific research and French. She also put those medals to her 6-year-old daughter to play. What a special person! Maybe it seems stupid, but it’s interesting and challenging to her to research in her study. Nothing could be more important than do the things she liked. Therefore she could be succeeded with her love and satisfaction.
That’s a successful example to pursue one’s dream with happiness and fulfillment. And there are also lots of examples like this. In the same, most of people only care of how to earn more and more money to express they are rich and successful. I’m sure that a part of them really achieved their goal. But were they happy when they get what they want? How many people want to get the wealth and fame around the world? How many people finally achieve it? Be carefully you will find that, a majority of successful people did things that they’d like to do. So sense of happiness and fulfillment are the really motivation for one’s achievement rather than wealth and fame.
In the end, just enjoy the thing you love and you will be successful.

December 18, 2014
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    In my opinion, Marie Curie is such a person.  She studied in chemistry and physics and she was the first person honored with two Nobel Prizes, as well as the first female professor at the University of Paris.  However, she never valued the fame, even though she could have enjoyed many rewards for her achievements. But she didn’t. She donated it (what is it?  If the reward you mentioned was money, be sure to make that clear in the previous sentence.) to scientific research and French. She also allowed her 6-year-old daughter to play with her medals.  What a special person!  Maybe it seemed stupid to others, but she found her research to be interesting and challenging. Nothing was more important to her than to do what she loved.  She was able to find success in her love and satisfaction.
    Marie Curie's life is but one example of why people should pursue their dreams with happiness and fulfillment.  And there are also lots of examples like this. In the same, Most of people only care about how to earn more and more money to express their wealth and success. I’m sure that a part of them really achieved their goal, but were they happy when they got what they wanted? How many people around the world want wealth and fame?  How many people finally achieve it?  If you look carefully, you will find that a majority of successful people did things that they liked to do. So a sense of happiness and fulfillment is the really true motivation for one’s achievement, rather than wealth and fame. 

In the end, just enjoy the things you love and you will be successful.

 

 

Good job and good luck!

December 18, 2014
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