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十五个句子 这些在我的中文句子。 1. 我跟我的女朋友每天从七点到十点学习。(I study with my girlfriend from 7 until 10) 2. 你们从哪儿来?(Where do you all come from?) 3. 她的妈妈今天中午做印度饭 (Her mom cooks Indian food this noon) 4. 你的弟弟有没有十四个兔?(Does your younger brother have fifteen rabbits?) 5. 她们喜欢跳西班牙舞。(They like to dance to Spanish dances) 6. 你的狗在我家很舒服。(Your dog feels comfortable in my house) 7. 我的吉他代表我的生命。(My guitar means my life) 8. 丽妍昨天晚上在华盛顿来接了我。(Liyan picked me up from Washington last evening) 9. 有人不喜欢和外国咖啡。(There are people who like to drink foreign coffee) 10. 我现在听得到你。(I can hear you now) 11. 他有机被白酒?(How many cups of white wine does he have?) 12. 巴西人不吸烟支美国烟。(Brazilians don't smoke American cigarettes) 13. 法国女人比较漂亮。(French women are the most beautiful) 14. 让给你两百块钱。(Allow me to give you two hundred yuans/dollars) 15. 我小时候每天看电视。(I used to watch TV everyday during my childhood)
Dec 18, 2014 10:52 PM
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十五个句子

这些在我的中文句子。

 

It is great that you have an English version.  This way, I can correct more precisely in your intent and meaning.

1. 我跟我的女朋友每天从七点到十点习。(I study with my girlfriend from 7 until 10)

跟 = and = 和.  However, 跟 has an implication of "to follow", "to obey".  学
There are many shades in Chinese to mean "to learn" with the following emphasis in English

学习 = practise                        ~武藝 = to learn and practise martial arts

溫习 = revise, review, go over   ~功课 = to learn and review your what you had learnt in school (aka homework)

練习 = train                             ~鋼琴  = to train and practise the piano


Same principle in English for words like "bleak", "spartan", "austere", "bare", "barren".  All have the general meaning but nuances are totally different.


2. 你们从哪儿来?(Where do you all come from?)

3. 她[]妈妈今天中午做印度饭 (Her mom cooks Indian food this afternoon)

4. 你[]弟弟有没有四个子嗎?(Does your younger brother have fifteen rabbits?)

The way you wrote is translated as, "Does your younger brother NOT have 15 rabbits?". The nuance is totally different.  It implies the questioner is in a state of incredulity.  Either the answerer is fibbing or exaggerating to the sky.
5. 她们喜欢跳西班牙舞。(They like to dance to Spanish dances)

6. 你的狗觉得在我家很舒服。(Your dog feels comfortable in my house)

7. 我的吉他代表我的生命。(My guitar means is my life)

What you wrote is "My guitar represents my life".  It is more natural to use 命根 in this context, "the root of my life", i.e. the source of my life. 我的吉他是我的命根

8. 丽妍昨天晚上在华盛顿来接了我。(Liyan picked me up from Washington last evening)
It more natural and shorter this way, 昨晚丽妍来华盛顿接我
9. 有些人喜欢喝咖啡。(There are people those who like to drink foreign coffee) In this context, 外来 is better than 外囯

10. 我现在听得到你。(I can hear you now) 

11. 他有机被喝了几杯白酒?(How many cups of white wine does he have?)

12. 巴西人不吸烟支美国烟。(Brazilians don't smoke American cigarettes)

13. 法国女氏至/最美人比较漂亮shortest and most polite(French women are the most beautiful)
Using 女人 is more of a flippant remark.


14. 让给你两百块钱。(Allow me to give you two hundred yuans/dollars)

Since you used "allow", this can be either very condescending or coming from a superior position (ie. I'm rich and you are poor and cannot afford it)  If it is a friendly way you are trying to convey, then use "let" instead of "allow".  Then the corresponding Chinese will be an addition of a final particle, 吧
15. 我小时候每天看电视。(I used to watch TV everyday during my childhood)

December 19, 2014
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十五个句子

这些在我的中文句子。

1. 我跟我的女朋友每天从七点到十点学习学到十点。(I study with my girlfriend from 7 until 10)

2. 你们从哪儿来?(Where do you all come from?) or你们来自哪里?

3. 她的妈妈今天中午做印度饭 (Her mom cooks Indian food this noon)

4. 你的弟弟有没有十个兔子吗?(Does your younger brother have fifteen rabbits?)

5. 她们喜欢跳西班牙舞。(They like to dance to Spanish dances)

6. 你的狗在我家很舒服。(Your dog feels comfortable in my house)

7. 我的吉他代表就是我的生命。(My guitar means my life)

8. 丽妍昨天晚上华盛顿接了我。(Liyan picked me up from Washington last evening)

9. 有人喜欢外国咖啡。(There are people who like to drink foreign coffee)

10. 我现在听得到你。(I can hear you now)

11. 他有机被白酒?I think it can mean that 他喝了几杯白酒?(How many cups of white wine does he have?)

12. 巴西人不吸烟支美国烟。(Brazilians don't smoke American cigarettes)

13. 法国女人比较漂亮。(French women are the most beautiful)

14. 让给你两百块钱。(Allow me to give you two hundred yuans/dollars)

15. 我小时候每天看电视。(I used to watch TV everyday during my childhood)

December 18, 2014

十五个句子

这些在我的中文句子。

1. 我跟我的女朋友每天从七点学习到十点学习。(I study with my girlfriend from 7 until 10)

2. 你们(都)从哪儿来?(Where do you all come from?)

3. 她妈妈今天中午做印度饭 (Her mom cooks Indian food this noon)

4. 你的弟弟有没有五隻子嗎?(Does your younger brother have fifteen rabbits?)

5. 她们喜欢跳西班牙舞。(They like to dance to Spanish dances)

6. 你的狗在我家(覺得)很舒服。(Your dog feels comfortable in my house)

7. 我的吉他代表就是我的生命。(My guitar means my life)

8. 丽妍昨天晚上华盛顿。(Liyan picked me up from Washington last evening)

9. 有人喜欢外国咖啡。(There are people who like to drink foreign coffee)

10. 我现在听得到你。(I can hear you now)

11. 他有机被喝了幾杯白酒?(How many cups of white wine does he have?)

12. 巴西人不吸烟支美国烟。(Brazilians don't smoke American cigarettes)

13. 法国女人比较漂亮。(French women are the most beautiful)

14. 让给你两百块钱。(Allow me to give you two hundred yuans/dollars)

15. 我小时候每天都在看电视。(I used to watch TV everyday during my childhood)

 

 

December 19, 2014
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