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Chon Seo Hㅁppy birthday for my pretty boy .. i miss you .. ..wait me i will back and dont be flirt to other girls i ill kill you haha joke..its okay beacsue you really flirt haha joke.. ok take care Chon Seo yeah! 生日快乐!我不能在韩国写到这里中国 from: young hyun 영현 <3 nan dangsin eul geuliwo hago nan dangsin-i al-aseo sarang chon seo
Dec 19, 2014 3:19 PM
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Chon Seo

Happy birthday for to my pretty boy .. I miss you .. ..wait for me, I will back, and dont be flirt to with other girls or I ill  will kill you. Haha joke joking... It's okay beacsue because you really flirt haha joke joking... Ok take care Chon Seo

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生日快乐!我不能在韩国写到这里中国

from: young hyun 영현 <3

nan dangsin eul geuliwo hago nan dangsin-i al-aseo sarang chon seo

 

You've done really well! Most of your mistakes were simple punctuation errors. 

 

Here is a "cleaned-up" version:


Chon Seo


Happy birthday to my pretty boy. I miss you. Wait for me because I will be back, and don't flirt with other girls or I will kill you. Haha, joking. It's okay because you're a flirt, haha joking. Okay, take care Chon Seo!


December 20, 2014

Chon Seo

Hㅁppy birthday for my pretty boy .. i miss you .. ..wait me i will back and dont be flirt to other girls i ill kill you haha joke..its okay beacsue you really flirt haha joke.. ok take care Chon Seo yeah!
生日快乐!我不能在韩国写到这里中国  我不能在中国这里写到去韩国(아가씨가 지금도 중국이신가요? I guess you had gone to China and would be back soon)

from: young hyun 영현 <3

nan dangsin eul geuliwo hago nan dangsin-i al-aseo sarang chon seo

February 11, 2015
我很喜欢看这样原生态直白的作文,但就是那句中文没看懂,有专家来解答一下嘛?
December 28, 2014
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