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description of picture Hey everybody, I am a novice in english and I would like to perform my english level, I just start by describe a picture and if you can correct me it will be very nice. Thanks guys This picture is a cartoon which represents the Concordat falling. On the middale of the picture we can see lot of womens of church falling in the river because of the deck's collaspe. On the left of the broken deck we can see the Pope who is stand up in front of us, on the other part which is not broken three men, two of them are destoying the desk and the other man is watching at them.
Dec 19, 2014 3:41 PM
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A description of a picture

Hey everybody, I am a novice in English, and I would like to improve. I will start by describing a picture; and if you could correct me, it would be very nice. Thanks guys.
This picture is a cartoon which shows the Concordat falling. In the middle of the picture we can see a lot of women of church (female worshipers) falling in the river because of the deck's collapse. On the left side of the broken deck we can see the Pope standing facing us, on the other side, which is not broken, there are three men, two of whom are destoying the deck ('the deck' or 'a desk' depending on what is in the cartoon) and the other man is watching them.

December 21, 2014
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