Esin
You are the most handsome thing happened to me today :) hi everyone :) A thing came happened to me today. The weather was better than ever today.l went out for walk in my house. while l'm wander on beachfront , l was see to him in front of me. he was coming for me. l didn't know the cause to this but l was excited .he stoped to by my side and asked time to me. l was answer to him. we were started to talk with each other. he spoke to me about yourself and so do l. We talked a long time.l said' l need to go' to him. but l wan't to go never.because l was feeling happy at his side. l will going to there . l hope he also will be there :)
Dec 20, 2014 1:43 AM
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You are the most handsome thing that happened to me today :)

Hi everyone :)
A Something came happened to me today. The weather was better than ever today. l went out for walk in from my house. While l'm wandering on the beachfront, l was see to saw him in front of me. He was coming for towards me. l didn't know the cause to this why but l was excited. He stopped to by my side and asked time to me the time. l was answered to him.
We were started to talk with each other. He spoke to me about yourself himself and so do l. We talked for a long time. l said 'l need to go' to him, but l didn't ever wan't to go never, because l was feeling happy at his side.
l will going to there again. l hope he also will be there. :)

 

Esin, the words 'handsome' and 'thing' don't really go together.

You could say "An amazing thing happened to me today" or "Today I saw a most handsome man."

If you have any questions, just ask.

Den.

December 20, 2014
What a beautiful story!
December 20, 2014

You are the most handsome thing happened to me today :)

hi everyone :)
A thing came happened to me today. The weather was better than ever today.l went out for a walk in my house. while l'm wander on beachfront , l was see to him in front of me. he was coming for me. l didn't know the cause to this but l was excited .he stoped to by my side and asked time to me. l was answer to him.
we were started to talk with each other. he spoke to me about yourself and so do l. We talked a long time.l said' l need to go' to him. but l wan't to go never.because l was feeling happy at his side.
l will going to there . l hope he also will be there :)

December 20, 2014
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