Laurence(何安傑)
我的家庭。My Family. 大家好!我是Laurence,我十九岁。 我的家庭有四个人。 我的妈妈叫Claire,她五十四岁。 我的爸爸叫Simon,他五十一岁。 我有一个哥哥,但我没有姐妹。 我的哥哥叫Thomas,他二十二岁。 我是英国人,但我同我的父母住在苏格兰 我们住在苏格兰十七年。 我们在苏格兰住在公寓。 我们的公寓是小,但不错。 我的卧室是大,和我喜欢我的卧室。 我在我的卧室有许多书。 我们也苏格兰有一个房子在. 我明年是大学生。我要就读中文! 大家再见! Hello everyone! I'm Laurence, I'm nineteen years old. . My family has four people. My mother is called Claire, she is 54. My father called Simon, he is 51. I have a brother, but I do not have any sisters. My brother is called Thomas, he is twenty two. I'm English, but I live with my parents in Scotland We have lived in Scotland for seventeen years. We live in an apartment in Scotland. Our apartment is small, but nice. My bedroom is large, and I like my bedroom. I have many books in my bedroom. We also have a house in Scotland. I will be a college student next year. I'm going to study Chinese! Goodbye everyone!
Dec 20, 2014 2:11 PM
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            我的家庭。My Family.

大家好!我是Laurence,我十九岁。
我的家有四个人。
我的妈妈叫Claire,她五十四岁。
我的爸爸名字是Simon,他五十一岁。
我有一个哥哥,
我的哥哥叫Thomas,他二十二岁。

可是我没有姐妹。
我是英国人,但我同我的父母住在苏格兰
我们住在苏格兰十七年。
在苏格兰我们住在公寓。
我们的公寓很小,但不错。
我的卧室很大,我喜欢我的卧室。
我的卧室有许多书。
我们也在苏格兰有一个房子。
我明年是大学生。我要就读中文!
大家再见!

Hello everyone! I'm Laurence, I'm nineteen years old. .
My family has four people.
My mother is called Claire, she is 54.
My father called Simon, he is 51.
I have a brother, but I do not have any sisters.
My brother is called Thomas, he is twenty two.
I'm English, but I live with my parents in Scotland
We have lived in Scotland for seventeen years.
We live in an apartment in Scotland.
Our apartment is small, but nice.
My bedroom is large, and I like my bedroom.
I have many books in my bedroom.
We also have a house in Scotland.
I will be a college student next year. I'm going to study Chinese!
Goodbye everyone!

December 21, 2014

我的家庭。My Family.

大家好!我是Laurence,我十九岁。
我的家庭有四(口)人。
我的妈妈叫Claire,她五十四岁。
我的爸爸叫Simon,他五十一岁。
我有一个哥哥,但我没有姐妹。
我的哥哥叫Thomas,他二十二岁。
我是英国人,但我同我的父母住在苏格兰
我们住在苏格兰(已经)十七年(了)
我们(住在)苏格兰(里的一个)公寓(里)
我们的公寓(虽然)小,但(还)不错。
我的卧室 (很)大,我喜欢我的卧室。
在我的卧室有许多书。
我们(在)苏格兰(也)有一个房子.
我明年(将)(一名)大学生(了)。我要就读中文!
大家再见!

Hello everyone! I'm Laurence, I'm nineteen years old. .
My family has four people.
My mother is called Claire, she is 54.
My father called Simon, he is 51.
I have a brother, but I do not have any sisters.
My brother is called Thomas, he is twenty two.
I'm English, but I live with my parents in Scotland
We have lived in Scotland for seventeen years.
We live in an apartment in Scotland.
Our apartment is small, but nice.
My bedroom is large, and I like my bedroom.
I have many books in my bedroom.
We also have a house in Scotland.
I will be a college student next year. I'm going to study Chinese!
Goodbye everyone!

December 20, 2014

我的家庭。My Family.

大家好!我是Laurence,我十九岁。
我的家庭有四个人。
我的妈妈叫Claire,她五十四岁。
我的爸爸叫Simon,他五十一岁。
我有一个哥哥,但我没有姐妹。我没有姐妹,但我有一个哥哥 
我的哥哥叫Thomas,他二十二岁。
我是英国人,但我同我的父母住在苏格兰 可以把但我删去
我们住在苏格兰十七年。
我们在苏格兰住在公寓。 我们住在苏格兰的公寓里。
我们的公寓是小,但不错。
我的卧室是大,和我喜欢我的卧室。 我的卧室很大,所以我喜欢我的卧室
我在我的卧室有许多书。 我在我的卧室里放置了许多书。
我们也苏格兰有一个房子在. 我们同样在苏格兰还有另一套房子。
我明年是大学生。我要就读中文! 明年我将成为一名大学生,我想要就读中文系。
大家再见!

Hello everyone! I'm Laurence, I'm nineteen years old. .
My family has four people.
My mother is called Claire, she is 54.
My father called Simon, he is 51.
I have a brother, but I do not have any sisters.
My brother is called Thomas, he is twenty two.
I'm English, but I live with my parents in Scotland
We have lived in Scotland for seventeen years.
We live in an apartment in Scotland.
Our apartment is small, but nice.
My bedroom is large, and I like my bedroom.
I have many books in my bedroom.
We also have a house in Scotland.
I will be a college student next year. I'm going to study Chinese!
Goodbye everyone!

December 20, 2014

我的家庭。My Family.

大家好!我是Laurence,我十九岁。
我的家庭有四个人。 (我家有四口人) 
我的妈妈叫Claire,她五十四岁。
我的爸爸叫Simon,他五十一岁。
我有一个哥哥,但我没有姐妹。
我的哥哥叫Thomas,他二十二岁。
我是英国人,但我同我的父母住在苏格兰
我们住在苏格兰十七年。
我们在苏格兰住在公寓。 (我们住在苏格兰的公寓里)
我们的公寓是小,但不错。 (我们的公寓不大,但还不错)
我的卧室是大,和我喜欢我的卧室。 (我的卧室很大,我很喜欢我的卧室)
我在我的卧室有许多书。 (我的卧室里有很多书)
我们也苏格兰有一个房子在. (我们在苏格兰也有一座房子/在苏格兰我们也有一座房子)
我明年是大学生。我要就读中文! (明年我就要上大学了。我要学中文)
大家再见!

Hello everyone! I'm Laurence, I'm nineteen years old. .
My family has four people.
My mother is called Claire, she is 54.
My father called Simon, he is 51.
I have a brother, but I do not have any sisters.
My brother is called Thomas, he is twenty two.
I'm English, but I live with my parents in Scotland
We have lived in Scotland for seventeen years.
We live in an apartment in Scotland.
Our apartment is small, but nice.
My bedroom is large, and I like my bedroom.
I have many books in my bedroom.
We also have a house in Scotland.
I will be a college student next year. I'm going to study Chinese!
Goodbye everyone!

December 20, 2014

我的家庭。My Family.

大家好!我是Laurence,我十九岁。
我的家庭有四人。
我的妈妈叫Claire,她五十四岁。
我的爸爸叫Simon,他五十一岁。
我有一个哥哥,但是我没有姐妹。
我的哥哥叫Thomas,他二十二岁。
我是英国人,我我的父母住在苏格兰
我们住在苏格兰十七年。
我们在苏格兰住在公寓。
我们的公寓虽然小,但是环境很不错。
我的卧室大,而且我喜欢我的卧室。
我在我的卧室放了许多书。
我们苏格兰有一个房子。 
我明年即将成为大学生。我要学习中文!
大家再见!

Hello everyone! I'm Laurence, I'm nineteen years old. .
My family has four people.
My mother is called Claire, she is 54.
My father called Simon, he is 51.
I have a brother, but I do not have any sisters.
My brother is called Thomas, he is twenty two.
I'm English, but I live with my parents in Scotland
We have lived in Scotland for seventeen years.
We live in an apartment in Scotland.
Our apartment is small, but nice.
My bedroom is large, and I like my bedroom.
I have many books in my bedroom.
We also have a house in Scotland.
I will be a college student next year. I'm going to study Chinese!
Goodbye everyone!

December 21, 2014
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