My First Note I'm a new member and this is my first note on italki. Firstly, I want to talk about how I have discovered this website briefly and then I will talk about my day. I have discovered italki

Erdem

My First Note I'm a new member and this is my first note on italki. Firstly, I want to talk about how I have discovered this website briefly and then I will talk about my day. I have discovered italki from the book named as ''Fluent in 3 Months'' by Benny Lewis who is a polyglot. When it comes to my opinion about this website, I think it's really beneficial for people who are interested in learning new languages and other cultures. I live in Antalya/Turkey. I moved to this city about 4 months ago. Antalya is one of the most beautiful cities of Turkey and it's an important tourist attraction. My house is close to the seaside and I sometimes go for walking. Today I went out late afternoon. As I like listening to music, I took my mp3 player before going out. I walked 7 km approximately. There were many people on the beach, some of them were fishing. There were also many people riding bicycle. I like walking along the seaside while listening my favourite songs. Here are some photos I want to share with you. Have a nice day!

Dec 20, 2014 6:27 PM

Corrections · 9

My First Note

I'm a new member and this is my first note on italki. Firstly, I want to talk briefly about how I have discovered this website briefly and then I will talk about my day. I have discovered italki from the book named as ''Fluent in 3 Months'' by Benny Lewis, who is a polyglot. When it comes to my opinion about this website, I think it's really beneficial for people who are interested in learning new languages and other cultures.
I live in Antalya,Turkey. I moved to this city about 4 months ago. Antalya is one of the most beautiful cities in Turkey and it's an important tourist attraction. My house is close to the seaside and I sometimes go there to walk. Today I went out in the late afternoon. As I like listening to music, I took my mp3 player before going out. I walked approximately 7 km approximately. There were many people on the beach. Some of them were fishing. There were also many people riding bicycles. I like walking along the seaside while listening to my favourite songs. Here are some photos I want to share with you. Have a nice day!

Very cool photos! I hope my corrections help. You hardly made any mistakes, but if you want an explanation about any of the corrections just ask! :D

December 20, 2014

I have been in Alania a little more than 2 years. Very beautiful place. I envy you a little. [emoji]

December 4, 2016

@Natalie: Yeah! The climate of Antalya is really good. Natalie, you live in the cold parts of the world. I recommend you visit Antalya if you have ever a chance. :) @Ruthi: Thank you for your comment Ruthi. I also feel myself very lucky to live here! :) @Niloofar: Yeah as you say, there are many tourist in here from all around the world espacially in the summer season. :)

December 20, 2014

I've been there many years age.There is a large number of Iranian tourists there especially in summer .

December 20, 2014

Beautiful photos of Antalya Erdem.I remember visiting that lovely place some years ago.You are lucky to live there! And your English is pretty good.:-)

December 20, 2014

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!