Is it correct? Is this sentence correct? "Assessment of occupational exposure to whole body vibration among subway drivers ". Thanks for your correction.

jamshid

Dec 20, 2014 9:34 PM

Corrections · 7

As it is a title, I have corrected the capitalization.

"Assessment of Occupational Exposure to Whole Body Vibration Among Subway Drivers ".

I haven't decided whether vibrations or vibration is better. I hope this response bumps your question to the top for a second or third opinion.

December 26, 2014

Thank you Mr.Morris and Azalea. You are right, this is the title of essay.

December 27, 2014

I agree with Mr. Morris. Of course if it is a title, it does not follow standard capitalization rules.

December 24, 2014

If this is a title (e.g. of an article, chapter or essay) then it is correct. If it is not a title, then it is not correct, because it is missing a verb (i.e. it is a noun phrase, not a clause. To make it a fully correct sentence you could add a verb (i.e. a main vern in a tense), for example: 'There WAS an assessment...'

December 20, 2014

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