一篇关于《Halo》的文章
（因为我经常不谈电脑游戏，所以我觉得写这个文章非常困难，因此我会给你们看一下英文版（的）看一下）
几天前我买了这个x-box360游戏——《Halo：Combat Evolved》《Halo：Combat Evolved》这个X-Box360游戏给我的儿子当圣诞节礼物。（这整句话调整一下语序好点）他非常喜欢玩第一人称射击游戏，但唯一的问题是，大部分这种电脑游戏不适合孩子。我问了在电脑游戏店里工作的男生，让他为我（你的英语文章有表示目的的意思，所以加上去好点哦）推荐我一个适合12岁的男生的游戏，。（分句意思没有直接关系，最好不要用逗号）他说虽然《Halo》是有16岁的分类，但但是（前面的“是”和后面的“但是”重复，建议换一个转折词语）真的不是很暴力或血淋淋的，所以我决定了买它。因为我想确定这个游戏是否核对真的适合他，所以今晚我审查了这个游戏。（“核对”和“审核”都不可以这样用，建议查词典看一下意思；这句话指代不明，前面要补充内容才是完整的句子）我通常不喜欢玩第一人称射击游戏，但是不过这个游戏太酷了，而且不太难！游戏画面也非常好看，控制游戏很容易用游戏controls很容易的，而且游戏地图很大 ，所以我迷路了几次（我迷路了几次）。(中文解释原因，很少打括号，一般直接写就好了)一开始我只打算玩几分钟，但我最后（却）最终玩了两个多小时。（句子都结束了，所以用句号，不用逗号）， 现在我不想给他这个游戏，想自己留下来保留一下！当然，我只是开个玩笑，我还是当然会把这个游戏（光盘）送给它给他，但是我一定肯定会继续玩！
(I don't often talk about computer games, so I found it very hard to write this, so I will give you the English version too).
A few days ago I bought my son the X-Box 360 game 'Halo: Combat Evolved ' as a christmas present. He really likes playing 1st person shooter games, but the only problem is most of these games are not suitable for children. I asked the guy working in the video game shop to recommend a game suitable for a 12 year old boy, he said even though 'Halo' is rated 16, it really isn't that violent or gory, so I decided to buy it. I wanted to check the game really was suitable for him, so tonight I vetted the game. I don't normally like 1st person shooters, but this game is so cool and not too difficult! The graphics are excellent, the game controls are easy to use, and the game map is huge (I got lost a few times). I only planned to play it for a few minutes, but ended up playing for more than 2 hours, and now I don't want to give it to him, I want to keep it for myself! I'm just kidding, of course I will give it to him, but I will definitely keep playing it as well!
一篇关于《Halo》的文章
（因为我不经常不谈电脑游戏，所以我觉得写这个文章非常困难，因此我会给你们看一下英文版看一下）
几天前我买了《Halo：Combat Evolved》这个X-Box360游戏给我的儿子当圣诞节礼物。他非常喜欢玩第一人称射击游戏，但唯一的问题是，大部分这种电脑游戏不适合孩子。我问了在电脑游戏店里工作的男生，他推荐我一个适合12岁的男生的游戏，他说虽然《Halo》有16岁的分类（限制），但是真的不是很暴力或血淋淋的，所以我决定了买它。因为我想確定核对真的适合他，所以今晚我試玩审查了这个游戏。我通常不喜欢玩第一人称射击游戏，不过这个游戏太酷了，而且不太难！游戏画面非常好看，用游戏控制起來controls很容易的，而且游戏地图很大 （我迷路了几次）。一开始我只打算玩几分钟，但我最终玩了两个多小时，现在我不想给他这个游戏，想自己留下來玩保留一下！我只是开个玩笑，我当然会把它给他，但是我肯定会继续玩！
(I don't often talk about computer games, so I found it very hard to write this, so I will give you the English version too).
A few days ago I bought my son the X-Box 360 game 'Halo: Combat Evolved ' as a christmas present. He really likes playing 1st person shooter games, but the only problem is most of these games are not suitable for children. I asked the guy working in the video game shop to recommend a game suitable for a 12 year old boy, he said even though 'Halo' is rated 16, it really isn't that violent or gory, so I decided to buy it. I wanted to check the game really was suitable for him, so tonight I vetted the game. I don't normally like 1st person shooters, but this game is so cool and not too difficult! The graphics are excellent, the game controls are easy to use, and the game map is huge (I got lost a few times). I only planned to play it for a few minutes, but ended up playing for more than 2 hours, and now I don't want to give it to him, I want to keep it for myself! I'm just kidding, of course I will give it to him, but I will definitely keep playing it as well!
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一篇关于《Halo》的文章
（因为我不常谈电脑游戏，所以我觉得写这个文章非常困难，因此我会给你们英文版看下）
几天前我给我儿子买了《Halo：Combat Evolved》这个X-Box360游戏，当成他的圣诞节礼物。他非常喜欢玩第一人称射击游戏，问题在于，大部分这种电脑游戏不适合小孩。我问了电脑游戏店里工作的男生，让他给我推荐一个适合12岁男生的游戏，他说虽然《Halo》有16岁的限制，但真的不是很暴力或血淋淋的，所以最终我决定买它。我想确认一下是否真的适合他，所以今晚我自己玩了这个游戏。我通常不喜欢玩第一人称射击游戏，不过这个游戏实在太酷了，而且不太难！游戏画面非常好看，游戏操控容易，而且游戏地图很大 （我曾迷路了好几次）。一开始我只打算玩几分钟，但最终玩了两个多小时，所以现在我不太想给他这个游戏，而是想留给自己！我只是开个玩笑，我当然会给他，但是我肯定也会继续玩！
(I don't often talk about computer games, so I found it very hard to write this, so I will give you the English version too).
A few days ago I bought my son the X-Box 360 game 'Halo: Combat Evolved ' as a christmas present. He really likes playing 1st person shooter games, but the only problem is most of these games are not suitable for children. I asked the guy working in the video game shop to recommend a game suitable for a 12 year old boy, he said even though 'Halo' is rated 16, it really isn't that violent or gory, so I decided to buy it. I wanted to check the game really was suitable for him, so tonight I vetted the game. I don't normally like 1st person shooters, but this game is so cool and not too difficult! The graphics are excellent, the game controls are easy to use, and the game map is huge (I got lost a few times). I only planned to play it for a few minutes, but ended up playing for more than 2 hours, and now I don't want to give it to him, I want to keep it for myself! I'm just kidding, of course I will give it to him, but I will definitely keep playing it as well!
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一篇关于《Halo》的文章
（因为我不经常不谈电脑游戏，所以我觉得写这个文章非常困难，因此我会给你们看一下英文版看一下）
几天前我给我儿子（just like in English, you can position this phrase in the front, with same effect in english）买了《Halo：Combat Evolved》这个X-Box360游戏给我的儿子当圣诞节礼物。他非常喜欢玩第一人称射击游戏，但唯一的问题是，大部分这种电脑游戏不适合孩子。我要求问了在电脑游戏店里工作的男生推荐我一个适合12岁的男生的游戏，他说虽然《Halo》有16岁的分类限制，但是真的不是很暴力或血淋淋的，所以我决定了买它。因为我想确认(confirm)核对是否（whether or not）真的适合他，所以今晚我审查(too formal, just say play it, 玩)了这个游戏。我通常不喜欢玩第一人称射击游戏，不过这个游戏太酷了，而且不太难！游戏画面非常好看，用游戏controls（操控）很容易的，而且游戏地图很大 （我迷路了几次）。一开始我只打算玩几分钟，但我最终玩了两个多小时，现在我不想给他这个游戏，想自己保留一下！我只是开个玩笑，我当然会把它给他，但是我肯定会继续玩！
(I don't often talk about computer games, so I found it very hard to write this, so I will give you the English version too).
A few days ago I bought my son the X-Box 360 game 'Halo: Combat Evolved ' as a christmas present. He really likes playing 1st person shooter games, but the only problem is most of these games are not suitable for children. I asked the guy working in the video game shop to recommend a game suitable for a 12 year old boy, he said even though 'Halo' is rated 16, it really isn't that violent or gory, so I decided to buy it. I wanted to check the game really was suitable for him, so tonight I vetted the game. I don't normally like 1st person shooters, but this game is so cool and not too difficult! The graphics are excellent, the game controls are easy to use, and the game map is huge (I got lost a few times). I only planned to play it for a few minutes, but ended up playing for more than 2 hours, and now I don't want to give it to him, I want to keep it for myself! I'm just kidding, of course I will give it to him, but I will definitely keep playing it as well!
一篇关于《Halo》的文章
（因为我不经常谈电脑游戏，所以我觉得写这个文章非常困难，因此我会附英文版参考一下）
几天前我买了《Halo：Combat Evolved》，这是个X-Box360游戏，给我的儿子当圣诞节礼物。他非常喜欢玩第一人称的射击游戏，但唯一的问题是，大部分这种电脑游戏不适合孩子。我问了在电脑游戏店里工作的男生，让他推荐给我一个适合12岁男生的游戏，他说虽然《Halo》的分类是16岁，但是真的不是很暴力或血淋淋的，所以我决定买它。因为我想知道这个游戏是否真的适合他，所以今晚我亲自审查了这个游戏。我通常不喜欢玩第一人称射击游戏，不过这个游戏太酷了，而且不太难！游戏画面非常好看，用游戏controls很容易，而且游戏的地图很大 （我迷路了好几次）。一开始我只打算玩几分钟，但我最终玩了两个多小时，现在我都不想给他这个游戏，自己保留下来了！当然，这只是开个玩笑，我会把它给他，但是我肯定也会继续玩！
(I don't often talk about computer games, so I found it very hard to write this, so I will give you the English version too).
A few days ago I bought my son the X-Box 360 game 'Halo: Combat Evolved ' as a christmas present. He really likes playing 1st person shooter games, but the only problem is most of these games are not suitable for children. I asked the guy working in the video game shop to recommend a game suitable for a 12 year old boy, he said even though 'Halo' is rated 16, it really isn't that violent or gory, so I decided to buy it. I wanted to check the game really was suitable for him, so tonight I vetted the game. I don't normally like 1st person shooters, but this game is so cool and not too difficult! The graphics are excellent, the game controls are easy to use, and the game map is huge (I got lost a few times). I only planned to play it for a few minutes, but ended up playing for more than 2 hours, and now I don't want to give it to him, I want to keep it for myself! I'm just kidding, of course I will give it to him, but I will definitely keep playing it as well!
