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I know what coffee smell I had some problems with my nose when I was kid. I was bleeding everyday two and three times almost 100 milliliter blood. I meet about ten doctors and none of them could treat me. some doctors said if I do the surgery I maybe lose my sense of smelling. I bleed for almost 8 years, and I visit a doctor who came back from United State and he treat me as well in a 5 minute surgery. I didn't bleed heavy on my nose from that day but I couldn't recover my weak body ever. I'm bleeding still time to time, very rare, and today is one of those time. Last time I bleed was 5 months ago.
Dec 21, 2014 6:17 AM
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I know what coffee smell

I know what coffee smells like

 

I had some problems with my nose when I was kid.

I had some problems with my nose when I was kid.

 

I was bleeding everyday two and three times almost 100 milliliter blood.

It bled two to three times everyday; I lost almost 100 milliliters of blood.

 

I meet about ten doctors and none of them could treat me.

I saw about ten doctors but none of them could treat me.

 

some doctors said if I do the surgery I maybe lose my sense of smelling.

Some doctors told me that if I had surgery, I might lose my sense of smell.

 

I bleed for almost 8 years, and I visit a doctor who came back from United State and he treat me as well in a 5 minute surgery.

My nose bled for almost 8 years. I visited a doctor from the United States and he treated me with a five-minute surgery.

 

I didn't bleed heavy on my nose from that day but I couldn't recover my weak body ever.

^ I am not fully sure what you mean here. If you can help me understand it better, I would be happy to correc this sentence for you as well.

 

I'm bleeding still time to time, very rare, and today is one of those time. 

My nose still bleeds from time to time, though it is very rare, and today is one of those times.


Last time I bleed was 5 months ago.

The last time my nose bled was five months ago.

 

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Good job! One thing to remember -- In English, often body parts can be the subject of the verb. Examples: His hair is growing. Her nose is bleeding. His eyes are dry. My leg is itching. Please let me know if you have any questions.

December 22, 2014
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I know what coffee smells like

I had some problems with my nose when I was a kid. I was bleeding everyday, two and three times a day and almost 100 milliliters of blood. I met about ten doctors and none of them could treat me. some doctors said if I do the surgery I might lose my sense of smell. I bled for almost 8 years, and I visited a doctor who came back from the United States who treated with a 5 minute surgery. I didn't bleed heavily from my nose that day but it was hard to recover because my body was weak. I still bleed from time to time, though it is rare, and today is one of those times. Last time I bled was 5 months ago.

December 21, 2014
I hope that you feel better soon and your nose bleeding stop.
December 21, 2014
Yea, I wish, actually there is many smells I enjoy but the coffee is the one which stays with me!
December 21, 2014
That is such a difficulty to live with for a lifetime. I am glad that a doctor was able to improve your situation. Hopefully you can enjoy more smells than coffee.
December 21, 2014
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