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About preschool education on [_] abroad

I have great interest about am very interested in preschool education because babyhood (this is not really a word. I would probably replace with “the first few years of someone's life) is (this would be “are”, if the previous correction is implemented) important for all person everyone I think. (I would prefer to put “I think” after “because”)
So recently I am have been searching for (information on) preschool education on abroad on the Internet, and I find found out there are many differences between each country.

(Notes: First of all, well done! The 'mistakes' I found are pretty tiny. People will still mostly understand what you're trying to say. Secondly, feel free to ask any follow-up questions. I'll be happy to answer if I can.)

About preschool education on abroad

I have great interest about preschool education because babyhood is important for all person,I think.
So recently I am searching for preschool education on abroad on Internet, and I find there are many difference each country.

I just want to point out "early childhood" is probably the term you want to use instead of "babyhood" which isn't used much and mostly refers to infancy.

Also "people" is better than "person" - I know it is difficult to know which of those two words to use!

Sounds good!