Go out mountain biking

Hello everyone. ,At 8:30 this morning, I went out to ride  mountain bike towards Mount Black in Belgium with my pals., There were eleven of us we were at eleven people,  and we didn't have any no particular problems, neither flat tyres, nor mechanical breakdowns piece of mechanic broken, and fortunately no one fell fall . It was a beautiful day, nice enjoyable and fun.

Thanks a lot for correcting my mistakes.
Didier

Go Went out on a mountain bike

Hello everyone ,

At 8:30 this morning, I went out to mountain biking towards Mount Black in Belgium with my pals. There were at eleven of us. There was no particular problem, neither flat tyres [tires], nor a piece of mechanical equipment broken. Fortunately, no fall. It was a beautiful, nice and fun day.

Thanks a lot for correcting my mistakes.
Didier

"I went out to mountain bike" is correct but it will sound more natural if you say "I went mountain biking" instead. In US and Canada, "tyres" is spelled as "tires." "Pals" is a good choice of word if you want to sound informal. You can also use "friends."

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