italki - daily practice (1) You have seen a man a few days ago in your local park, causing damage. Write a le

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daily practice (1) You have seen a man a few days ago in your local park, causing damage. Write a letter to the park management and say - What did you see? - Who are you? - What do you think should be done about it? Mr./Mrs. Last weekend, I saw a mid-aged man in a red coat manage to break in a fence in your park. The damage he did is still clear there, which is a stain to the beauty of this public place. I am a college student from Normal University of Beijing. This park is my favorite relaxing place during my free time; I often hung out with a few school friends here. In my opinion, such activities should be polished, otherwise there would be more happened in the future. More stuff is needed to secure the public facilities in the park, especially during weekends and holidays when there are much more visitors here. Sincerely, Wang

Dec 22, 2014 8:02 AM

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daily practice (1)

You have seen a man a few days ago in your local park, causing damage. Write a letter to the park management and say
- What did you see?
- Who are you?
- What do you think should be done about it?
Mr./Mrs.
Last weekend, I saw a middle-aged man in a red coat who managed to break in a fence in your park. The damage he did is still clearly there, which is a stain to on the beauty of this public place.
I am a college student from Normal University of Beijing. This park is my favorite relaxing place to relax during my free time; I often hung hang out with a few school friends here.
In my opinion, such activities should be polished punished, otherwise there would be more happened in the future. More stuff things* is are needed to secure the public facilities in the park, especially during weekends and holidays when there are much more visitors here.

Sincerely,
Wang