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shorthought I think that satisfied with where I stand and laugh a lot with family is the most important thing in the universe. Also that's why human have improved their quality of life. Sometimes people seem to live for making money. Actually making money is necessary part of life. But I think more money don't promise more happy. I experienced it in the temple stay. Thanks for my parents' patience and love. They've made me happy every christmas. I'm trying to get english. It's so hard~! I wanna get up all about english and talk with native naturally soon.
Dec 22, 2014 3:08 PM
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A Short Thought

I think that being satisfied with where I stand and to laugh a lot with my family are is the most important things in the universe.
That's why human have improved their quality of life.
Sometimes, people seem to live to make money. Actually, making money is a necessary part of life
 but I think having a lot of more money doesn't promise to make us more happier. I experienced it in the temple where I stay.

Thanks for my parents' patience and love.
They've made me happy every Christmas.

I'm trying to get learn English. It's so hard~!
I wanna know everything get up all about English and talk with the natives naturally soon.

December 27, 2014
It's nice to hear that there are people who realizes the importance of family and being satisfied. I think your thought's very good! I hope this will encourage a lot of people to be satisfied with what they have as well. I hope you had a very MERRY CHRISTMAS and I hope it's not yet too late to greet you, 메리크리스마스!
December 27, 2014
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