Jerry Woo
My Daily Commute To Work I live at the city of Wuxi ,south of Jiangsu Province, and I work at neighboring city: Suzhou. I usually get up at six o'clock in the morning , when it's chilling in winter. after shaving beards and washing face, I leave home at six thirty. getting to the subway station at six forty-five, I start fifteen minutes journey to wuxi railway station ,where I take the high speed railway train to the Suzhou railway station normally at seven thirty. now I can walk along the river, watch beautiful scenary with traditional Chinese flavors, until my company's shuttle bus comes and picks me up to office. My trip to return home is exactly the opposite: office-Shuttle bus-high speed train-subway-home. I plan to buy a car after Chinese Lunar New Year, that will save my time on the road.
Dec 23, 2014 3:00 AM
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My Daily Commute To Work

I live in the city of Wuxi, in the southern part of Jiangsu Province, and I work in neighboring city: Suzhou.
I usually get up at six o'clock in the morning, when it's chilling still chilly in the winter. After shaving my beards and washing my face, I leave home at six thirty. getting to I get to the subway station at six forty-five, I start then it is a fifteen minute ride journey to the Wuxi railway station, where I usually take the high speed railway train to the Suzhou railway station I normally depart Wuxi at seven thirty. now Then I can walk along the river, watching the beautiful traditional Chinese scenery with traditional Chinese flavors, until my company's shuttle bus comes and picks me upand takes me to the office.
My trip to return home is exactly the opposite: office-Shuttle bus-high speed train-subway-home. I plan to buy a car after Chinese Lunar New Year, that will save me time in my commute. on the road  

 

Yes, but if you buy a car you will walk less, and you won't experience the scenery every morning.

December 23, 2014

My Daily Commute To Work

I live at in the city of Wuxi, in the south of Jiangsu Province, and I work at in the neighboring city: Suzhou.
I usually get up at six o'clock in the morning, when it's chilly  chilling in winter. After shaving beards and washing my face, I leave home at six thirty. getting to I arrive at the subway station at six forty-five, and begin the  I start fifteen minutes journey to Wuxi railway station, where I take the high speed railway train to the Suzhou railway station, normally at seven thirty. now Then I can walk along the river, look at/take in the watch beautiful scenery with traditional Chinese flavors, until my company's shuttle bus comes and picks me up to take me to the office.
My trip to return home is exactly the opposite: office-Shuttle bus-high speed train-subway-home. I plan to buy a car after the Chinese Lunar New Year, that will save my time on the road.

December 23, 2014

My Daily Commute To Work

I live at in the city of Wuxi , south of Jiangsu Province, and I work at in a neighboring city:, Suzhou.
I usually get up at six o'clock in the morning , when it's chilling chilly in winter. After shaving my beards and washing my face, I leave home at six thirty. getting to Arriving at the subway station at six forty-five, I start the fifteen-minutes journey to Wuxi railway station , where I take the high-speed railway train to the Suzhou railway station, normally at seven thirty. now Then I can walk along the river, watch look at the beautiful scenary scenery with traditional Chinese flavors [1], until my company's shuttle bus comes and picks me up to take me to the office.
My trip to return home is exactly the opposite: office, Shuttle bus, high-speed train, subway, and home. I plan to buy a car after Chinese Lunar New Year, that which will save my time on the road traveling [2].

 

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[1] The word 'flavors' would not usually be applied to scenery.  Since I don't know what you mean by 'flavors' here, I can't suggest alternative words.

 

[2] There are two problems with using the phrase "on the road". First, the subway and high-speed train are not "on the road".  Second, using your own car would still be "on the road".

 

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Well done.  Even though I have made many corrections, your meaning was always very clear.

December 23, 2014
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