The oldest Yoga Teacher At the last meeting we talked about who we admire of famous people and whom we would like to be like. At first I could not remember anyone, but then I remembered a remarkable w

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The oldest Yoga Teacher At the last meeting we talked about who we admire of famous people and whom we would like to be like. At first I could not remember anyone, but then I remembered a remarkable woman, who called the oldest yoga teacher in a world. She is 96 years old. She is still dance and do yoga. I told about this woman, because I admire of she and I would like to be like her at that age.

Dec 25, 2014 9:19 AM

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The Oldest Yoga Teacher

In our last class we talked about famous people we admire and whom we would like to be like. At first I could not think of anyone, but then I remembered a remarkable woman who is considered to be the oldest yoga teacher in the world. She is 96 years old, but she still dances and does yoga. I talked about this woman because I admire her and I would like to be like her at that age. :D

December 25, 2014

The Oldest Yoga Teacher in the World

At my last meeting (with whom?) we talked about which of famous people we admire and whom we would like to be like. At first I could not think of anyone, but then I remembered a remarkable woman, who is known as the oldest yoga teacher in the world. She is 96 years old. She is still dances and does yoga. I talked about this woman, because I admire her and I would like to be like her at that age.

Nice paragraph! I can see you're still translating literally, so beware of that. A couple more points:

Some verbs require certain objects. For example, you meet with someone, you admire someone and you tell someone something. A good dictionary will show you which structures go with each verb.

Using the tells me that I should know which thing you mean. I don't know about your meeting, but I do know which world, as there's only one. You can use a possessive if the sounds strange.

We remove redundant words to avoid repetition in the same sentence, eg. I admire her and would like to be... We still know it's you doing the action.

Use present simple for regular habits: She still dances and does yoga. In this case, you can also use present continuous: She is still dancing and doing yoga. She hasn't stopped yet!

February 1, 2015